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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Title: Confronting the Problem 12 Jun 2011 2:04 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry could solve his nightmares by flying for a long while before bed to totaly exhaust himself. When I wear myself down like that, I don't dream at all. Perhaps he should try thinking more of things that make him happy before he falls asleep? God bless.
Title: The Ritual of Renewal 09 Jun 2011 9:46 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Err... Okay. I really am not that huge a fan of rituals that include asking blessings from a form that is not God. Like the elements. It just doesn't feel right.
Title: The Request 09 Jun 2011 2:52 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No, I do not want to see them become a couple. I already have to put up with the fact that Ginny is Harry's girlfriend in the books, not me. :(

    Author's Response: There's an easy solution to that problem . . . just pretend whoever Harry's involved with in this fic is yourself, like you swapped souls and minds or something. Works for me!
Title: Sylvanor's Children 08 Jun 2011 11:15 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Can you please get them out of there? It's getting dull. I hope this is AU. The Horcruxes are not where they should be.

    Author's Response: I believe I did mention in the summary of this fic that this was an AU storyline. It would never be considered canon, since Harry and Severus are allies and Animagi.  I also thought I mentioned in one of my notes that the Horcruxes were NOT the same as in the books, two especially are vastly different, one of them in this part of the story.  They are also, as should have been obvious by now, not all hidden at Hogwarts. To me that wouldn't make sense, you don't hide the pieces of your soul all in one place, it makes it too easy for someone to defeat you--and Riddle's not stupid.  What exactly do you find dull about this part? The fact that they have to ask for help from a new species of person? Sorry, but Severus and Harry aren't all knowing and they do need help on occasion.
Title: Hawks At Play 08 Jun 2011 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I said a Fatama Prayer, Hail Holy Queen, Our Father, and a few other prayers for your cousin. I pray that she has a swift journey through purgatory.

    Author's Response: Thanks! That's very kind of you.
Title: Stormy Weather 08 Jun 2011 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you know, Harry could just get a cold that turns into something 'cause he hid it...

    Author's Response: Actually, Harry does develop a cold later on, when they finally reach France.
Title: Bearding the Minister 12 May 2011 2:31 pm
Reviewer: Anano (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Now we'll make him an offer he can't refuse." - looooove this phrase from Godfather, I am so glad, you used it))).
Title: Dawn Flight 28 Mar 2011 6:43 pm
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I totally loved this series. I have to appologize because this is my first review. I started reading last week and I just couldn't stop. This is a great universe. I was not sure when I started how I was gonna like the whole Harry as a hawk thing, but it was amazing. Then when Albus lost his magic I was like oh no give it back, but then when I kept reading, I loved him living as a muggle. I also love the family relationship he has with Harry and Sev. I am reading your Prince Manor series right now and I love that too, but I cannot wait for you to start the next story in this series. I hope that Sev gets together with Thea, and I am sure that Harry will have lots of new adventures with his friends. I would love to see the wolfen intrigrated more, like maybe some of them adopted into families. Sirius could definitly use a teenager, Remus and Tonks too. Just a thought. Great writing totally loved it!!
Title: Dawn Flight 10 Mar 2011 2:23 am
Reviewer: NightPhoenix69 (Signed) [Report This]
    YES! WRITE MORE! LOVED ALL OF IT!
Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 03 Mar 2011 6:15 pm
Reviewer: NightPhoenix69 (Signed) [Report This]
    I do so love reading stories that have Dursley punishment in them. So creative!

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