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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 16 Feb 2010 9:30 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I got my silent hope for Remus, great ingenuity. Pity Greyback didn't injure Lestrange first *mumbles*
Title: Alerting the Order 16 Feb 2010 9:08 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like what I've read so far and I'm sure I'll like whatever you do next, but I would like to see past the final battle please. I could use some bonding. If it's not too much to ask. Otherwise I'll just read your other stories
Title: Danger Comes A Callin' 16 Feb 2010 8:54 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I have two questions, why didn't they floo, and the weres wouldn't have noticed the leaving if it weren't for Freedom. Why did Warrior let him do that?
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 16 Feb 2010 8:32 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    The rat is dead the rat is dead! I wrote a fic where Pettigrew was fed to an owl once.
Title: The Mastery of Fear 16 Feb 2010 8:15 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you made him live through the torture he put others through. I have nothing more to add, I just hope all goes well.
Title: The Mastery of Fear 16 Feb 2010 8:12 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you made him live through the torture he put others through. I have nothing more to add, I just hope all goes well.
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 16 Feb 2010 7:25 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like your Lion King reference. I think Scar would be a prettier hearth rug though.

    Creepy, I like it.
Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 16 Feb 2010 3:51 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Does the dagger effect animals? I was thinking it may be better if Harry puts the potion out and Hedwig drops the dagger in after Harry leaves.
Title: Fallen 16 Feb 2010 3:11 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't review, must read
Title: The New Headmaster 16 Feb 2010 1:51 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that Severus has taken the position! he is just perfect and with Albus to advise will make a fantastic headmaster, I love all the new teacher he has appointed, cant wait to see if anything will happen between Severus and Thea too. Im also looking forward to some Harry/Severus interactions as Harry deals with his phobias, and of course the boys helping Albus get accustomed to his new way of life :D

    Author's Response:

    Sev and Thea will be coming up in the sequel, if I do one.

    Oh there will be plenty of Sev/ Harry bonding and helping out good old Albus!


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