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Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 1:14 pm
Reviewer: SugarQuills (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! Great chapter! I love how Remus defeated Greyback by outsmarting him. Glad to see that you got over that writer's block :)
    Hmm... I wonder who's gonna come back next chapter? I hope it isn't Voldemort *shivers* But I've got a couple more guesses.
    Update soon! Excellent work like always

    SQ

    Author's Response:

    Yes finally! Thanks to everyone.

    Now you can find out who comes back, because I just posted it.

Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 7:42 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved that Grayback got smashed flat by the willow!!! Served the bugger! Lots of actions, good chapter!

    Author's Response: Yeah it did and I'm so happy he's gone. I love sticking it to the baddies.  And I've updated again!
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 6:40 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    HA! Greyback is DEAD! YES! Awesome chapter, I'm so glad. :]
    ~Fern Rose

    Author's Response: He sure  is! And now you can read all about who came back in the next chapter!
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 6:31 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Bravo! That was really cool that you thought about killing Greyback through whomping willow and the coming of Crabbe was really good too. Will look forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much.  I wanted to do something different to kill him off and the willow just came to mind.  You'll see Crabbe more as the chapters progress. I've just updated again!
Title: Alerting the Order 23 Oct 2009 12:56 am
Reviewer: jcmsheltiepup (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm really loving this story!!! It's great. Keep up the awesome work!

    To answer your questions:
    1.I think i either applies to Albus or the kids, Sev, Harry and Albus.

    2.I think it's fitting to have Remus fight Greyback & Remus should win.

    3.I think Bella should be killed. I really don't care for Sirius so whatever you do with him is fine by me.

    4.YES!!! I want to see Sev and Harry bond @ Spinner's End.

    Now that I've gave my opinion, I completly trust your judgement on what you do with this story. I know I will love whatever you do.

    jc

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much and I'm happy you trust me.

    The first question could be all three of them or maybe even four of them.

    You'll be seeing what I do with the battles right now!

Title: Alerting the Order 20 Oct 2009 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying the story. Sirius should confront Bella. I do want Severus and Harry to bond, but I would like to see the wolfen again.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much1 I'm finally over my writer's block and I've updated again.  Twice!
Title: Alerting the Order 19 Oct 2009 11:24 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Can't wait for the big battle at Hogwarts. Hope all the werewolves get roasted (not Remus though, unless you really have to kill off one of the good side).
    Part 3 sounds great - there can never be too much of the lovely Sev, and he and Harry deserve a bit of r and r after the Horcrux hunt.

    Author's Response: No, Remus won't die. I never liked it that he died in the books. I agree and that will be coming up after the battle.
Title: Alerting the Order 19 Oct 2009 6:02 am
Reviewer: EmmalynnLilliannaSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY for updates!!!

    Okay, so I think the answer to Harry's question isn't referring to just one of them. It says "a steadfast and true heart", so I think it means each needs to be that... Does that make sense?

    Greyback should die, and I'd love Remus to do it. Go Remus!! And Sirius should kill his enemy too, so go Sirius!!

    YES! Of course I want to see stuff at Spinner's End! It's what I've been waiting for since you started this!! I don't think Sirius should be there TOO much, cause Sev's cooler and I like him more... Haha. I really would love to see some serious (no pun intended) bonding between Harry and Sev!!

    Author's Response:

    Yes it does and that's very good reasoning.

    Okay I'll keep that in mind.

    No Sirius won't be there too much, just enough to visit Harry and help out with something.

    And you'll get your wish! But first . . .the last battle.

Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 18 Oct 2009 6:51 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool! I loved the ghosts, and hope they'll be freed when Voldy dies. I also like how you showed Dumbledore here as a person and not just the all powerful wizard. Loved what he did to the Dursleys, they so deserve it.

    Author's Response: That's a possibility.  Yes my goal is to make Dumbledore into a human being and not just the great wizard.  They do and you'll see how it affects them later on.
Title: Alerting the Order 18 Oct 2009 4:42 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Trelawney in this, you've really given her so much more personality. It's great! Poor Harry, he feels so much guilt, but that's okay because he's never killed before. And so it should affect him like that. I think that all three hunters have a true and steadfast heart.

    I like all your ideas and can't wait to see what you do. Whatever it is, you know I'll read it!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'll be giving Sybil a lot bigger role to play here.  You could be right about all three and Harry deifnitely needs to let go of his guilt.

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