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Title: Alerting the Order 18 Oct 2009 4:39 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I think both he and Severus are the true heart in the prophecy.

    I love how you write and think that whatever you decide will be wonderful. But I would love to see Greyback and Bella get theirs and more of Severus and Harry at Spinner's End would be great, they need some time to jusy be normal.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and thanks for reading! Harry does need some time to just be a normal teenager and Sev will do his best to give him that.
Title: Alerting the Order 17 Oct 2009 7:04 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh lets see... if Remus had a fight with Greyback he would surivive, right? if yes then sure why not hehe, he certainly would deserve it! I would love for Bella to die, so that she would be no further threat to anyone, it would be cool if Sirius did it :)
    As for part 3, I think it would be a fab idea, I love series type stories and love to see Harry/Severus bonding anytime :D

    Author's Response: Okay and I will keep that in mind and thanks
Title: Alerting the Order 17 Oct 2009 6:55 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Answer to Harry's question: I think it's Hedwigs heart. :]

    Remus and Greyback should fight, and Remus should kick some butt.

    Sirius and Bella should fight, and Sirius should kill her. For sure.

    Having a 3rd part with lots of fluff would be lovely. :D
    ~Fern Rose

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much! I'm looking forward to writing that part.

    And the final battle between all the rest of them. 

    You could be right. Maybe it's all their hearts.

Title: Alerting the Order 17 Oct 2009 9:18 am
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    From the way Sybill think i'm not sure if the steady heart is even Harry's or Serverus' lol

    I would like a part 3 with the life of all of them after this war so you'll have at least me to read it ^_^

    Thanks

    Author's Response:

    Yay! Thanks!

    You'll see who the true heart is at the end of the battle.  And more of Sybil to come.  I've just updated two new chapters!

Title: Alerting the Order 17 Oct 2009 7:49 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    In answer to some of your questions, yes,sirius should fight bella and win. I would love to see Sev and Harry bond and be together, and have sirius and sev working together. Don't make harry to nuts though, a lot of love and stability is all he needs. Yes, part 3 is great, love the story.

    Author's Response: Oh no. Harry deserves a chance to rest and to heal and so does Severus. Thanks so much and I've updated again finally!
Title: Alerting the Order 17 Oct 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was brilliant Snapegirl. Poor Harry though. It must be horrible for him to know that he killed a living being, even an evil one.


    Looking forward to seeing the children rescued.

    Oh...and whatever you decide is fine. You always come up with brilliant plots and I'm sure that you won't disappoint us.

    Author's Response:

    It is hard, but this is a war after all and unfortunately sometimes you have to take lives. 

    Thanks so much and I hope you like what's next!

Title: Alerting the Order 17 Oct 2009 4:31 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    I would be intersted in Harry and Severus bonding at Spinners End. A part 3 would be great. And Harry needs to hook back up with his love.

    Author's Response: Oh yes all of that could happen and now I've updated again so you can see what's happening next!
Title: Alerting the Order 17 Oct 2009 4:01 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I love you work! I don't know about a steadfast and true heart, it could apply to either of our heros. Remus and Grayback at Hogwarts!!! I WANT GRAYBACK SKINNED!!! I have always hated that character in any form (Peter to for that matter). Yes! Bella and Sirus, but he kills her! I would love to see a bonding and a third story to this series if you are up to it. I almost hate to see this story end.....but "all good things."

    Author's Response: Yes me too! And he will get his don't worry!
Title: Foreboding 17 Oct 2009 2:46 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! It was funny when Harry had a nightmare and woke up Severus and he was grouchy!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope you like it!
Title: Alerting the Order 17 Oct 2009 12:49 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like all the three ideas! I think it is fitting that Remus should kill greyback, since he was the one who infected him and the same goes for Bella. It might be more poetic if she kills herself as the last hope of Voldemort's coming back is gone and Dumbledore and Harry and Sev are still safe.

    Would love to see Harry finding a healing too.

    This chapter was really short though..

    Author's Response: Yes I know, but the other ones won't be. Thanks for reading and for your suggestions!

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