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Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 12 Oct 2009 4:25 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you're doing a great job with the other characters. All the children come across with their own personalities. I just love Vince in this story! Lucius is a cold wicked thing and Bella is just plain scary, reminds me of the mom in Psycho. The way you killed Wormtail was the best though!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Now I feel more confident and can get on with writing the next chapter. 
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 12 Oct 2009 4:18 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved how you had all the children working together to plot an escape route, instead of just sitting about whining. Good for them! I also loved the way Vera handled that rat. Such a wicked death for a wicked individual! Kudos! But I can't wait for more Harry and Sevvy!

    Author's Response: I don't think those four would sit tamely by and just wait to be rescued.  They don't seem the type.  Yeah, I really don't like Pettigrew and was happy to kill him.  More Harry and Sevvy is up now!
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 12 Oct 2009 6:48 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    o.o wow things are happening fast. can't wait for harry and sev to come into the picture again i think they need to kick some serious butt!

    Author's Response:

    Yes they are, and it's almost like a landslide. 

    Harry and Sev are back, just read the next chapter to see.   

     

Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 7:20 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, go Vera! Thank goodness Pettigrew finally got what was coming to him. And I like the idea of Lucius skinning Greyback and dancing on his pelt just so he gets hit with a deadly spell immediately afterwards. I'm glad you've given us these two latest chapters as I was wondering what was going on with the others and I love what you've done with Vince. He's really blossoming into a wonderful young man. And I should have reviewed and told you this yesterday but my internet provider was not cooperating: I love what you've done with Dumbledore. All the characters are doing a lot of self-discovery here and it's so good to see him changing from a manipulating (if well intentioned) director who has everyone else take the risks and make the sacrifices. He's going to finally e a great man as well as a great wizard if he makes it through this alive. I hope he will but I'm not going to make any presuppositions about what you have planned. I'm looking forward to your next installment. Cheers!

    Author's Response: me too! I really liked exploring the other characters and they'll be getting a few more pages later on.  I wanted to show that Dumbledore can change, if he wants to, but he has to want to. Yes, he will finally be the man he has always thought he was if he lives through this. And so will everyone else, excepting the bad guys.  Thanks and I'm really happy that you like what I did with everyone. 
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 6:56 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent dispatch of Wormtail!
    The children all have their own distinct personality, and Crabbe in particular is consistent with the character you gave him earlier on.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much and now you can read the next part--it has Harry and Severus in it, as promised.
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 1:21 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you did a brilliant job with all the extra characters in this story, canon and original ones :)
    I loved what Vera did to wormtail, a good way for such a sneaky little rat to die! she is one cool familiar :D

    Author's Response:

    Yes, she sure is!

    Oh good, because I wasn't sure if I was portraying them correctly, thanks for letting me know.

Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 12:17 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    this chapter was ok for me...i miss reading about harry and sev but i understand that this is also a focal point in the story. You portrayed the characters well. The reactions they have suit that situation, especially marietta when she finds out they have dumbledore. Good job! but bring on the harry and sev parts!!! :D

    Author's Response: Thanks very much, I appreciate it.  Read the next chapter I've posted and you'll see lots of Harry and Severus!
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 9:04 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad wormtail is dead. more of harry and sev, and the kids, please. post soon!

    Author's Response: I have just posted and Harry and Sev are back!
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 6:39 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Loved how Wormtail met his maker!!! Served the rat!!! Loved that the snake even hungry wouldn't eat the wretch! Never could stand that character in any form. Love your death of him better than any!!! Keep up the great work!

    Author's Response: Yay! I wanted to give him a really fitting ending, because I can't stand him either. Ugh!
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 3:45 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Brrr. I think I'd about pee my pants if Bella grinned at me like that! Sorry, too much information. Anyways, I like your portrayal of characters other than Harry and Sev.

    Author's Response:

    Ahh!

    Actualy, I think Bella is scarier than Voldy.  Thanks a lot and hope you like the next part.


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