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Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 22 Sep 2009 9:40 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!!! :O


    Poor Crookshanks, and how awful for all the children. I hope that Sev and Harry will be able to find and rescue them. I'm anxious to see some news of our boys too!

    Great chappie, I really enjoyed your descriptions of each of their homes. Well done.

    Ooh, I'm looking forward to reading your fic for the prompt fest, but I greedily want another chappie of this and want to read more of old violet eyes too!

    I haven't even started my fic yet!!! :O

    Ooh, and I'm off to read your next chappie of Ariadne too, which I'm really enjoying BTW!!!

    Author's Response:

    Poor Crookshanks indeed, although he's not dead. 

    Sev and Harry's POV will be coming up in a few more chapters. 

    The descriptions of their homes were hard to write about since I had to think about what everything might look like. 

    I should be posting another chapter of this really soon. 

    I'm now working on TWO fics for the PF, one I wrote by myself and the other with RaeKelly.

    So glad you're enjoying all my stories. 

Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 22 Sep 2009 8:07 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting chapter, it was good to see how it all happened :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! I should be posting more soon! Like tomorrow!
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 22 Sep 2009 7:57 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice to get some background detail to round out the more minor characters. Can I be pedantic on a tiny point though - as Somerset is a county in the West of England, shouldn't Hermione live either in Somerset, or near a large city like Bath (or maybe that's just a culture difference thing).

    Author's Response: Thanks! I kind of pictured Hermione living in a small town near a larger one.  She didn't really seem like a city girl to me. 
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 22 Sep 2009 3:27 pm
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What is "Prompt" Fest?

    Author's Response: It's the new contest on here at Potions and Snitches. I'm going to be entered twice, one story I wrote myself and the other I co-authored.
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 22 Sep 2009 8:50 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Oyster spoons lol >_> my dad uses a fork and sometimes a regular spoon he says fork works better. XD He laughs when my sister tells him about special utensils for foods. XP And I think Oyster spoons are funny, clams are harder to eat XD they stick more.

    So that was their master plan in capturing Dumbledore :(
    Poor Albus he really does love his children. Stupid evil people! GO Away! Roar! lol :D

    Author's Response:

    yeah the forks are easier, but I think the Brits prefer spoons. 

    Yes, and they are evil and will get what they deserve eventually. I should be posting the next part soon!

Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 22 Sep 2009 7:49 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, you wicked authoress! I hope they're all okay!

    Author's Response: You'll see soon! I should be posting the next chapter tomorrow morning.
Title: Sojourn 18 Sep 2009 4:08 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that book how can someone NOT recognize it?! As soon as I heard a caterpillar with red head I laughed. :D One of the first books I ever read!

    Things are beginning to pick up again, they never seem to ever catch a break lol!

    Author's Response:

    I don't know . . .maybe they wouldn't know it because no one ever read it to them?

    No, there's always something going on. 

Title: Sojourn 16 Sep 2009 2:41 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, such a sweet chapter! I loved the bonding moment, but I get the feeling that now is the calm before the storm. I would love to see a different POV, much as I love Harry and Severus.

    Author's Response: You'd be right.  Thanks because that's just what you're going to get for about five chapters or so.
Title: Sojourn 16 Sep 2009 4:39 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great choice of book1 My son loved that book when he was that age. I love how Severus is with Jilly and Harry and how Harry has managed to shelve his guilt over Severus for now.

    But now I'm worried about the other four kids and Albus. Lucius and Bella are very evil and not to be trusted.

    Author's Response: One of my favorites too! Yes, they are in trouble and need help.  Read the next part to find out how it all occurred.
Title: Sojourn 15 Sep 2009 10:57 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh kidnappings! exciting stuff lol, I loved the part with Severus reading to Jilly, that was my all time favourite story as a child and was a firm favourite with my nursery key group children as well, they all knew it off by heart :)
    Cant wait to see everyones point of view on how and when they were kidnapped :)

    Author's Response: Mine too! I loved that story. I used to read it to my pre-schoolers and also the kids who came for storytime at B &N.  Such a wonderful story, it's a classic.  I figured Jilly and Sev could benefit from it.  That part's posted now!

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