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Title: Sojourn 15 Sep 2009 8:58 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My favorite part of this chapter is that sev and harry feel like father and son. About time harry feels love. Cant'wait for next chapter to understand what happened with the kidnapping.

    Author's Response: Yes, they do and that's such an important part of this story.  The next chappie's up!
Title: Sojourn 15 Sep 2009 4:11 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    -Twitch twitch- heh heh heheh. Okay. Everybody's gonna be okay. Heh. Heheh.

    Author's Response: You hope so, right? But maybe not. Those DE are nasty people and they like hurting those in their power.
Title: Sojourn 15 Sep 2009 3:55 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that ritual seems to have filled Harry and Severus with peace and erased Harry's guilt. I'm so glad.

    That little Jilly is just a sweetheart, isn't she? So sweet.

    Oh no!!! Hermione and the others! I hope that they're going to be alright!

    Good chappie Snapegirl, but I'm dying for the next one to find out more about Hermione and the others.

    Author's Response:

    It has done that and Harry's guilt is now easier to bear because of it.

    I just love Jilly, she's based off my little great-niece Natalie.

    They are in a bit of a tight spot now, and the next part has been posted!

Title: Sojourn 15 Sep 2009 3:41 am
Reviewer: charmedlily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thankyou for telling me about this site, the next time ff.net gives me a problem with your story I'll remember to come here. Keep up the good work! - Charmedlily

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I will always post on this one as well as ff.net.
Title: Sojourn 14 Sep 2009 10:25 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW! You got me there! I though this chapter would be a happy one since the rital of the last chapter was so intense, but BAM right between the eyes. Keep up the wonderful work!!! This was worth using my lunch for!

    Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked it! I hope you like the next one too!
Title: Sojourn 14 Sep 2009 9:32 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Their back. Argh!!! Cliffies are the worst. Very clever chapter btw :P.

    Author's Response: Thanks! And I see you've seen Poltergeist.  Now that movie was scary!
Title: Sojourn 14 Sep 2009 9:27 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! This turn of events was totally unexpected! I hope Dumbledore will survive the ordeal and along with others or even the victory will be tainted. Fudge will be out of control without Dumbledore and the redemption for the wolfen would be near impossible.

    Will wait eagerly for the next chapters..

    Author's Response: You're right.  Victory would be tainted if Dumbledore dies, since Fudge would never listen to Harry or Severus.  More has been posted.
Title: Sojourn 14 Sep 2009 6:42 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a funny children's book :-) I am curious to hear the stories of the kidnapped teens. Mila

    Author's Response: Yeah it's one of my favorites. teach kids about numbers and food and caterpillars as well as colors too. It's a highly regarded preschool book over here in the USA.  The story of the kidnapped teens will be posted next!
Title: Sojourn 14 Sep 2009 1:52 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant, brilliant. Oh, just to let you know - FF.net has something going on over the last few days and this particular chapter of yours did not come through this morning. You might want to attempt a repost over there.

    Cheers!

    Zara

    Author's Response: Thanks! It did finally post over there, just so you know. It showed up on my account but not some others. 
Title: The Ritual of Renewal 12 Sep 2009 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks, hope you enjoy the rest.

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