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Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Hedwig should make Harry bring the cauldron outside so that she can go get and then drop the dagger directly into the cauldron so Harry never has to touch it.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your idea, funny but a lot of people have suggested that. If you read the next chapter you'll see what becomes of the dagger and Harry and Sev.
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 11:55 am
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the best way about it is to ask Hedwig to drop the dagger in the potion lol

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review and your idea!
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 7:24 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. Especially how it shows that Harry is maturing and how he reacts to different people in the witherspoon household. Hope Severus will wake up soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks and Severus will be doing just that next chapter, which should be up shortly.
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 7:05 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw Jilly is so cute. She sensed Harry's pain. How sweet.

    Oh, Jace knows now, and he doesn't judge Harry. I'm glad. Harry doesn't need to feel anymore guilt.

    I really hope that Harry can convince Hedwig to let him destroy the dagger.

    Great chapter, I have tears in my eyes. I'm so sad for Harry. He needs Sev. back

    Author's Response:

    She really is and she'll help Severus too!

    No, he's not that kind of person. Jace is very self contained and mature for his age, it comes from being a reader. Yes, he does and he will get him back.

Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 23 Aug 2009 2:09 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter! Loved it and I'm sure Harry can convince Hedwig and brew the potion. Can't wait for your next update!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and I have just updated so now you can see what happens!

Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 22 Aug 2009 12:04 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    wow Jace has a really cool family.
    harry's afraid to tell them that he was under the influence?

    hm harry should just brew the potion and put the cauldron outside and let hedwig fly by and drop the dagger in with harry faaaar from it lol

    well i hope he can brew it on his own if not we're all doomed!

    Author's Response:

    Yes he is afraid of what they would think of him. 

    Yeah that could happen that way.

    You'll find out next chapter, which I have posted.

Title: Potion Master's Peril 22 Aug 2009 11:57 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    o.0 must go on to read..um what was the crack? at first i thought it was harry's head...but i guess not XD

    Author's Response: Oh yes, it was Harry's head. he banged it into the tree to try and stop the voice in his head.
Title: Fallen 22 Aug 2009 11:47 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    o.o that's all i can say really...stupid princess grr!

    Author's Response: yes, she really is a horrible thing . . .considering she's the dagger.
Title: Tempted 22 Aug 2009 11:10 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    o.0 Bad Dagger! Hope it's destroyed soon or that Severus or Hedwig notice this isn't just him being an pissy but a real problem T_T...the dagger wow I'm so mad at it I have no words to describe it really does seem like a person to me...kill the little girl! muahahaha! XD

    Author's Response: It's meant to seem that way and it really is evil and nobody understands just how evil it is.
Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 22 Aug 2009 6:09 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Well-written chapter. I like that you brought Jace back in. And what a great family!

    Author's Response: I really was looking forward to bringing him back and creating his family was just too fun. I have just updated this again so now you can see if Harry can brew the potion.

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