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Title: Pursuit 29 Jul 2009 4:07 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    "Hedwig blinked her beautiful eyes in answer." :3

    ARG! Ugly ugly Maldecorvae's and Werewolves! I hope the Wolfen are ok.

    I had the story on favorite series and favorite author but i still didn't get the updates so i added it to favorite story =) i get the updates again.

    Hope they make it to Italy soon!

    Author's Response:

    Okay hope it works now!

    I'll have a new chapter up soon! Look for it tonight!

Title: Pursuit 29 Jul 2009 3:06 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OmG!!! That was terrifying. I thought that they were goners. It's a good thing I don't have a heart problem, young lady, because with all this excitement, I'd be toast!

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Oh . . .well then I guess  I write action scenes pretty well.

    And there's more to come so be prepared!

Title: Pursuit 29 Jul 2009 2:17 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Hah, Warrior and Hedwig kicked some feathery BUTT! xDD I loved the Sasha/Harry moments. this was all in all a really good chapter. xDD

    Author's Response: Yup thanks for reading! There will be more posted soon! Tonight as a matter of fact!
Title: Herbology Lessons 28 Jul 2009 2:37 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    AHHH! A too many kisses XD They're all growing up so fast *sniff* lol

    unexpected pursuit complicates Severus and Harry's departure...hm...o.0 erg Fenir? Erg Sasha? XP

    Can't wait, please update when you can :3

    Author's Response:

    Yes they sure are!

    Uh you'll see when you read the next chapter.  It's a surprise!

    Okay, will do!

Title: The Request 27 Jul 2009 12:23 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    lol her improvisation was really good :3
    for a second there I thought she could actually understand Hedwig.

    I dunno if they should be a couple since to me when I see Meadowsweet I see her as an older sister towards harry more, also she seems a bit more mature than harry.

    but if you think it could work then by all means give it a go i'll support your decision!

    Author's Response:

    No, but she's clever and has a wicked sense of humor.

     

    She is, but that's as a result of being totally on her won and in charge of  a bunch of mostly male teenagers.  It makes you grow up fast.  But Harry will grow up too on this quest, she's actually only a year older than he is.  She's seventeen and he'll be sixteen in July.  Plus, I think Harry could benefit from an older woman's perspective.  And having a girlfriend is also bound to make Harry act more like an adult, especially if the girlfriend is Meadowsweet.

    There's one more chapter after this one posted!

Title: That Which Is Hidden 27 Jul 2009 12:05 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    0.0 oh crud what horrid trees definitely a million times worse than the whomping willow since they can talk...

    Author's Response:

    Yes and there are more of them, so they can hurt you all at once! I'd be petrified.

Title: Mist and Shadows 27 Jul 2009 8:06 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Well at least Hedwig isn't dead >_>
    Hopefully her sight will return, poor harry eating too much lol. sorry for not reading and reviewing!! I haven't been getting the Update emails, grr! =P Off to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    No, she's not, I would never kill her  off!

    Yeah, that's one thing he'll never do again, or at least not soon. 

    Really? Maybe the system's down again? Did you mark this as a Favorite Story and Favorite Author me? I think that's how you get Alerts on here.

Title: A Wicked Gathering 26 Jul 2009 2:52 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice--at first, I thought this chapter would be hard to get into since it lacked your two main characters, but it was good! I liked the fear they all held towards Greyback and how they discovered Snapes' betrayal.

    I'm sorry I've been so slow about reading this--real life has been kicking my butt recently and sadly, it's only going to get busier next week :(. I am still enjoying your story though and I will keep reading it as my time allows.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Greyback is a SCARY thing, even if you're on the same side as him.  He's a loose cannon and extremely unpredictable.

    Thanks and I understand totally about RL, I've been busy myself with work and attending four different funerals in the past month--first my cousin died of a sudden heart attack and then my brother-in-law's sister died a week after, and then my friend of the swine flu and last week my great-uncle died, he was 89 and his heart just gave out.  It was really hard to deal with.

    So please keep reading, I look forward to seeing what you think of the rest of this! :)

     

Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 11:06 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool!

    Author's Response: Thank you1 Glad you liked it!
Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 10:16 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice interlude, and it was great to check in on Vince and Marietta. :-)

    Author's Response: Yeah I wanted to bring them back and show how they were getting on.  You'll see more of them later on in the story.

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