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Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 8:28 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm about ready to kill you.

    I love Meadowsweet. She and Harry match perfectly and her personality is a dream to read. No matter what anyone says, keep Meadowsweet in the picture. I think she and Harry have much in common and deserve one another. And if Severus has issues with it... You could always tell Phil to bite him.

    I hope that, once all the Horcruxes are destroyed, that Harry returns for Meadowsweet. She is a young woman deserving of love and I know that Harry will treat her with the respect she deserves. Not to mention that /she/ could always bite him too.

    I enjoyed the glimpse of Crabbe's life. He's a true character now - not just a side character mentioned in the books. I like his personality. He seems funny and shy but charming at the same time. Marietta is one lucky woman.

    Keep up the excellent, excellent work, Kathy. I am greatly enjoying this story. But then... I love all your stories.

    Update soon. I shall be waiting!

    Always yours,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Okay, but why?

    meadowsweet is Harry's match and I will be keeping her that way.  Severus wouldn't have too many issues with her, but he will caution Harry to be prepared that he might not be able to get the wolfen released . . .unless Fudge agrees.  I'd like to tell Phil to bite Fudge!

    Yes, he will keep his promise.  It is not one that he made lightly.  He would and yes, she could bite him also! LOL!

    Vince will be appearing more in this book, you'll see what ahppenes later on.  He has a major role to play.  Marietta is and she knows it, and so is Vince.

    Thanks, I will try to update soon, barring any other unforeseen tragedies.  *knocks on wood*

     

Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 8:01 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, curiouser and curiouser. It seems as if Harry's found his soul-mate in Sasha, eh? And I like that bit about Vince, it was sweet. You, by far, are a clever author.

    Author's Response:

    As Alice said, LOL!

    You are right.  Vince is weet and you'll see more of him and Marietta later on.

    Thanks and so are you! I really like your new story! It's very captivating.

Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 9:59 am
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    It was nice to get some news about Vince ^_^

    Thank you

    Author's Response: You're welcome! He'll be appearing more later. 
Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 4:13 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the romance, it's so sweet! I really hope nothing bad happens to Meadowsweet before Harry can convince the Ministry to release the wolfen from the forest. The herbology lessons were great and I so loved Vince, Marietta and his little sisters. Please put more of them in here!

    Author's Response:

    Something happen to Meadowsweet? Now that would be terrible.  Something could happen to Harry though. 

    Vince will be appearing more in here as will Marietta.  I love the little ones too.

Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 4:03 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I really like the way Vince and marietta's relationship is developing and Harry and Sasha's too. I hope they continue to grow and blossom. Can't wait for the next part.

    Author's Response: Thank you and I'll try and have more romance further down the road.
Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 1:59 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Poor Harry. How embarrassing to be reprimanded in front of the girl he's smitten with.

    That was cute the little scene at Vince's house. I love how you write family scenes. You really have a knack for making the little kids sound so adorable and the family dynamic close and comfortable.

    Aw,...Harry and Meadowsweet. I feel so bad for them that they have to part. I really hope that they can be reunited soon.

    Ooh, I'm worried about this unexpected pursuit.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that's very embarrassing, but Severus was annoyed, he hates to be ignored while teaching, especially something this important.

    Thanks! That's probably due to my own family's influence.  I have so many little kids around and my family is loud and noisy and I think when I bring a guest home they get overwhlemed for a bit till they get used to it. 

    It's really too bad, but . . .the quest must go on and who knows . . .Harry could convince Fudge to revoke his ruling on the wolfen once he tells Fudge how Darkmoon and Meadowsweet helped them find the third Horcrux.

    You should be worried, it's not a good thing, what will happen next.

Title: Herbology Lessons 25 Jul 2009 1:40 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Both of those couples are so sweet! Such a fluffy chapter. I think we needed that one. I like how Sasha can see Harry for who he is, and not what he is. He's not an animagus, or the Boy-Who-Lived to her. Not totally. He's just... Harry, to her. And that's what Harry really needs. Someone who knows who Harry is too. Does that make any sense from my convoluted mind over here?

    Author's Response:

    We did, especially since the next one is going to be action filled and very very tense. 

    Sasha is one of the few people who can do so, the other is Severus.  And one of the reasons she can is because she is apart from the wizarding world and has experience in looking at people for who they are and not what they are.  Yes, it does make sense.  Thanks for reviewing so frequently!

Title: The Request 23 Jul 2009 1:50 am
Reviewer: Alifromnm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You just keep getting better and better!!! I am really loving this and the other story you have been working on! Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad to hear that.  And now I have more for you.
Title: The Request 21 Jul 2009 10:25 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good one! I am not sure if Fudge would agree though. He probably won't even believe in the theory of the horcruxes or that Harry and Snape actually destroyed them. You might have to invent some really special reason for him to agree.

    I liked the chemistry between Harry and Meadowsweet, but not sure about them being a couple.

    Great writing once again. Looking forward to next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    I don't think he would either, and yes, it will take some pretty fast talking and maybe threatening to run an article in the Prophet and expose it all for him to agree.

    They won't be an actual couple just yet, because Harry needs to finish his quest and get her released from the forest first.  But I was seeing what you all thought of it.

    Thank you! Hope you enjoy the next one.

Title: The Request 21 Jul 2009 1:18 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    It crossed my mind that maybe Severus will try to get Meadowsweet to come to Hogwarts for a while (for a part of the next school year, or so) - as a Pomfrey' appentinence. Otherwise I don't know how Harry/Meadowsweet could work, they would hardly ever see each other...
    Well, I will let myself be surprised how you will write their story!
    Mila

    Author's Response: Oh yes, that would be a good scenario, once they get Fudge to lift the ban on the wolfen.  True, unless something like that happens, they wouldn't be able to be together! That's really good, Mila.  And now you can see more of them and also of Crabbe and Marietta.

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