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Title: In the Forest of the Night 26 Jun 2009 2:15 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    *Hands over grilled cheese sandwiches* =)enjoy!
    It was cute to see Harry so excited :3
    I'll just take the butterbeer thank you, it's summer but it's cold here >_<
    I hope the wolfen are friend, maybe an elder from the pack will remember Tom and his dark ways....by any chance he invaded and killed some of the pack? o.o who knows only the chosen one knows lol. Can't wait, I hope Greyback and werewolfs gets his tail whipped! But I wonder why Greyback wasn't there with them and they were wining maybe they did get their tails handed to them...hm...^______^

    Author's Response:

    Yummy! Thanks!

    One butterbeer coming right up. *hands you one*

    That could happen, with Voldy anything is possible. 

    Greyback wasn't with them then, but he'll be along later on.  There will be some major fights between him and the wolfen and someone else as well.

Title: A Wicked Gathering 26 Jun 2009 2:00 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    AHHHH! NOOOO That's where they're going! Grrr where's a the weirdo wolf killer when you need one?! lol >_< gonna read the next chapter now. XP

    Author's Response: Okay, hope you like it!
Title: In the Forest of the Night 26 Jun 2009 1:44 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I may like the young hot head. He could certainly be useful if he decides "for" our hawk-boys.

    I like the side trip to Rome.

    Looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response:

    Darkmoon's not a bad guy, as you'll see.  He and his wolfen could be VERY useful since they know the forest blindfolded. 

    I love Italy, can you tell?

    I should have that up soon.  I hope.

Title: In the Forest of the Night 26 Jun 2009 1:25 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Answer me this: why should I feed you if you won't feed me?

    Well, the introduction of the wolfen impressed me; the sublte hint of Dracula was truly genius. It was nice to see Severus intimidated especially when he, himself, is so intimidating. I certainly hope Fenrir isn't stupid enough to pursue them into wolfen territory...

    The side trip to Rome simply made me fall in love with Italy all over again... My cousin saw the Colliseum and Venice too. Wow, the only place I've ever been to is Alberta and New York City. Not very exciting.

    Are you going to update Return to Prince Manor? You've got ten chapters for THH but only FIVE for Return to Prince Manor. Darling... I think your fans of Two Hawks can wait until you catch up!

    I'm looking forward to more!

    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Jewels.

    I was working on RPM, but the wolfen idea won't leave me alone and if I don;t write when I have afresh idea in my head I'll lose it or the impact of it.  Sorry if that sounds weird, it's kind of hard to explain. And I would have finieshed the chapter of RPM last night, but then I got a very depressing phone call, my brother-in-law's sister just died.  She was in her forties . . .and might have committed suicide or died of alcohol poisoning, they aren't sure which.  So after that . . .I didn't much feel like writing.  I don;t know what is it with my family, I think we're cursed or something. This is the sixth death in my family in one year.  So far I've lost four cousins, one cousin's wife, and now this.  And nearly all of them were unexpected sudden deaths from heart attacks, anuyerisms and such. 

    So forgive me if I'm a little exhausted and aren't writing with my usual speed, I'll try and update soon. 

    Fenrir is a collossal idiot and just might be stupid enough to try and explore the forest.

    Wish I was back in Italy now. 

Title: In the Forest of the Night 25 Jun 2009 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, I think I'm going to love the Wolfen. I think they'd make great friends for Sev and Harry........maybe there's a single thirty-something Wlfen for Sev? That would certainly help to get him over his werewolf-anxiety!

    Author's Response: They will, once they know they can trust our two hawks.  Yeah, that's a pretty funny idea.  It certainly would help.  You'll see next chapter.
Title: In the Forest of the Night 25 Jun 2009 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, there you are!!! :))

    Glad you posted over here too.

    Great job, and exciting chappie. Can't wait to see what happens. I hope that Sev and Harry can get out of this one!! :)

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I finally got time to put this chapter up. 

    They should be able to.  You hope!

Title: A Wicked Gathering 25 Jun 2009 2:59 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Marvelous set of chapters! I liked how Sev handeled a sick Harry--and how Hedwig handled a scared and impertanent Harry.

    As for you "bad guys" Well done.

    Looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'm happy you enjoyed poor sick Harry and Sev taking care of him.  I love a quiet and healer-like Snape. 

    That Hedwig, she doesn't take anything from anyone!  I just love her.

    The next update has been posted.

Title: A Wicked Gathering 25 Jun 2009 12:54 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Merlin....Sev and Harry are walking into a trap! Thank heavens that they got away from Gaunt manor before the pack came. You, Snapegirl, are one sly author. Btw I have updated Cat's eye View, just so you know.

    Author's Response:

    I know, it's scary.  Better watch out guys!

    Yes, I have just reviewed you it was great! And now I have 2 updates for you, this one and Prince Manor.

Title: A Wicked Gathering 24 Jun 2009 2:57 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked them . . .they were well done, but I didn't like what they are capable of doing to Sev and Harry. THAT scares me. The one good thing is that the werewolves might not be looking for two hawks and our heroes can spot them from the air before they have a chance to attack. Lucius's eye was scary too and something tells me Greyback is going to wriggle out of that spell before long.

    By the way, I'm writing this from England, I'll be here for 2 weeks. Cheers!

    Author's Response:

    Wow! Hope you're having a good time there! I wish I was there!

    yes this really was a scary chapter Thanks for taking the time to review from across the pond.

    TTFN,

    Snapegirl

Title: A Wicked Gathering 24 Jun 2009 2:44 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    That really was a gathering of the wicked and the scary! Makes me want to hide someplace far away. LOved how your portrayed Greyback and Bella though. And Lucius's eye . . ugh! Narcissa was very good too, with her spell. Update soon and I hope Sev & Harry aren't hurt by the werewolves.

    Author's Response:

    Me too! Like in a foxhole with a certian Potions Master. In his lap.

    Great, I really don't like them either.  I wanted you to fear them because they are seriously insane and disgusting. 

    I have just updated! Yay!


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