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Title: No less than the trees and the stars 29 Jul 2009 8:13 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter. things are looking up finally.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you :) Yes they are beginning to really respect and (dare I say it) care about eachother now. Having said that neither of them make it easy for eachother at times!

     

Title: No less than the trees and the stars 29 Jul 2009 2:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was very well handled. I'm impressed with Snape AND with you. Great chappie!

    Update soon please!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah I thought it was about time Snape told Harry he would never send him back to the Dursleys. He should never have said that in the first place but his bark is worst than his bite (mostly anyway!)

    Cheers for the review :)

Title: Sirius 29 Jul 2009 2:07 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, fantastic chapter, but how sad that Sirius had to die. :(

    Loved Snape's control and yet you keep him in character. Don't worry, you've done a great job with it.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you - glad you liked it. Yeah poor Harry no wonder he's an emotional wreck:(  

    This is probably the chapter I've deliberated over most in terms of how Snape would act so I'm glad you don't think he's OOC.  

Title: No less than the trees and the stars 29 Jul 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL go Sev!! He's so confused, but he's reacting pretty well, anyway. Calmly, at least. And go Dumbledore! :-)

    Author's Response:

    He he well Snape did actually intend to have a go at Harry when he went up to see him but isn't so good at dealing with all the crying lol. I based the 'ignoring him completely' until he's stopped crying bit on my mate who lives in an all-male household where they just don't talk about emotions at all. Though in a way getting Harry to make potions was Snape trying to be nice cos that's what he would choose to do if he was upset :) 

Title: Sirius 29 Jul 2009 1:18 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice!! I like!!! I think both Harry and Sev's reactions are realistic and in-character. I think that, as a spy, Snape would be able to hold his temper if he actually tried - we just haven't seen him try in canon. One thing, though - you haven't confirmed that Sirius is dead, and I'm really hoping you leave him dead. I hate it when authors 'kill' someone for drama's sake, but don't actually have him dead. I mean, it's your fic, so if that's the plan then stick to it, but I personally think Sirius should stay dead. Anyway, thanks for the fun chappie, keep writing. :-)

    Author's Response:

    lol I just had a review on fanfiction begging me to 'make Sirius be alive', all I'm saying is it's deliberately ambiguous but that doesn't necessarily mean your concern is going to come true (just that a degree of uncertainity will play a role in the plot in a few chapters time).

    Anyway glad you liked it. Yes Snape can keep his temper if he really wants to.He has to be an amazing actor in front of Voldermort after all.

     

Title: Sirius 28 Jul 2009 7:20 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    love this story so much!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it. Hope you like the next chapter too :)
Title: Sirius 27 Jul 2009 12:45 pm
Reviewer: bridie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is probably my favourite chapter so far and the one where Snape and Harry are both MOST in character if you ask me.

    I think it's reasonable the way Harry is feeling and smashing things up is definitely something which he would do. I think it would have been VERY OOC if Snape had not lost his temper this time. And you mention that Harry thinks that Snape had been decent to him, then is he really that scared of him anymore?
    He seems to have managed to do quite a few things by now without getting Snape angry, does he maybe think that Snape is relatively harmless now?

    Snape does not seem too soft, but I doubt he would want Harry to think that he has somehow "won" and let him get away with smashing his house up like that... Afterall, Snape has a large amount of pride too.

    But yeah, that's just my opinion. Keep up the good writing and I can't wait until the next chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your review :) You're right that Harry is overcoming  his fear of Snape - that was the last chapter when he is really scared of him (its only gone on this long because of his experiences with his uncle still playing on his mind). I thought that Harry would still do all these things, despite his fear because he is kind of in self destruction mode.

    He he yes Snape has his pride to uphold and I always think of him as keeping his temper despite having an urge to throttle Harry from time to time.  

     Hope you like the next chapter :)

Title: Sirius 27 Jul 2009 10:38 am
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed) [Report This]
    perfect. not overdone at all. snape doesnt seem OOC at all and Harrys temper is kind of to be expected too, eaven through his fear. well done

    Author's Response: Thank you :) It  was really hard to strike that balance between Snape letting things go because he knows Harry is genuinely distraught and times when I felt he just wouldn't stand by and let him get away with stuff. I'm glad you think it wasn't OOC. :)
Title: Eavesdropping 20 Jul 2009 1:16 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I like!!! I can't really think of specifics but I really, really liked this chapter. I especially liked how Harry truly meant to leave when he realized that it was Order information he was listening in to, but didn't when it was Sirius because he was worried. Very nice :-)

    Author's Response:  Yes Harry tries to behave but it all goes out the window when it comes to people he cares about! Thanks for the review and hope you like the next chapter.
Title: Eavesdropping 18 Jul 2009 2:03 am
Reviewer: Wyrsa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for very nice story.
    Snape is his own snarky self, full of misconseptions, and Harry fiery and lonely adolesent under heavy pressure - perfect duo...
    That's what I call torn between two wishes - I would like to see next part asap, though I feel almoust inevitable looming. (( *apprehensive glance at warnings* Dread.
    But please, please, update!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I really want to see if I can manage to keep Snape in character throughout this even as he gets closer to Harry! I also think Harry wears his heart on his sleeve and can't help showing people what he feels but Snape would want to hide his feelings from everyone.

     Next chapter hopefully won't be too long :)


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