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Title: Eavesdropping 18 Jul 2009 1:59 am
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a lovely story. I've gone through three tissues already. Such angst. Your Severus and Harry are so in character!

    You have some issues with spelling and grammar... the spell for Legilimency is Legilimens (you've had a couple of different spellings).

    One of the last lines: "Severus think he had actually listened to him." (think should be thought)
    In other chapters: pijamas should be pyjamas (assuming british spelling)

    in: "when they found out he had ran away from him" (had ran should be had run, which is the pluperfect.)

    There were a few others that I noticed, but the story itself is so fabulous, that I am well and truly hooked. More!

    (adding to favorites)

    Author's Response:

    Ah yes the angst-I'm afraid there's lots more of that headed this way!

    As for the spelling and grammar *blushes* I will amend all those errors as soon as I get a sec. I tend to type like a mad thing and give it a quick (and obviously not particularly thorough) read through. Opps. Cheers for pointing them out...

    Lots more of this story to come, next chapter is half written but I am starting a new job and flat seaching at the mo so I've been a bit busy lol :) 

    Thanks for reviewing.

     

Title: Eavesdropping 14 Jul 2009 9:27 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, starting to move in good interaction between snape/Harry. Looking forward to sirius too!

    Author's Response:

    Yes Snape and Harry will be reaching an understanding although it may not seem like it's headed that way at times! Watch this space re Sirius...

    Thanks for taking the time to review :)

Title: Eavesdropping 14 Jul 2009 7:27 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it:)
Title: Eavesdropping 14 Jul 2009 2:42 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh well now you really have to update, like yesterday!

    I love how you keep Snape in character, and Harry too.

    Poor Harry though, I wish that someone would tell him what's going on. Poor kid.

    Author's Response: Am working on the next chapter and trying to keep them both in character cos it all gets a bit crazy...Harry's gonna find out more soon. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: A truce of some description 13 Jul 2009 1:26 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story!! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter shouldn't be long...
Title: A truce of some description 12 Jul 2009 4:54 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    :-) I like. Poor Harry...he seems to have caught Snape at a bad moment. LOL you'd think he'd figure that out on his own.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah but being Harry he felt guilty that Snape got hurt because he was protecting him, and he can't stop himself from rushing in and trying to help- bless him.

    Thanks a lot for reviewing :) 

Title: A truce of some description 12 Jul 2009 1:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus, how horrible! That acid must have hurt like hell. I really hope that he has a potion that will prevent him from scarring.

    This chapter was amazing, and powerful and I thought that you portrayed their burgeoning relationship very well.

    Author's Response:

    I know - I was trying to think of some particularly nasty and vindictive spell for Voldermort to do and throwing acid in someones face seemed up there with the worse. Don't worry there won't be any permanent damage although Snape finds it hard to deal with Harry witnessing his humilation.

    Thank you for your comments. Yes I just don't want them to get on too well too soon. Though I'm pretty sure that's not going to be an issue in the next chapter... gonna be a lot of angst I think.

Title: A flight in the mind's eye 05 Jul 2009 7:32 pm
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed) [Report This]
    i'm lovin' this, thankyou for updating so regularly, cant wait to find out what harry did by imagening he was flying. update soon pleeeease!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your review :)

    Sorry it took me a bit longer than usual to do an update for ch 7, I had a job interview this week so was distracted by that! 

    Anyway hope u like the next chapter

Title: A flight in the mind's eye 04 Jul 2009 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    HB, this story is great, and I really love how you keep Severus in character.

    I'm glad though that he got to see a bit of what Harry has gone through at the hands of the Muggles.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review - I really appreciate the fact that you keep writing them :)

    Yes I hope I manage to keep Snape in character, even as he softens to Harry. The next (or possibly one after next) chapter will be quite a challenge in that respect I think with whats going to happen...  I won't give anything away apart from to say that Severus is gonna need to try and keep his temper! 

Title: A flight in the mind's eye 04 Jul 2009 8:35 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool! I like this!! I especially like the flying-occlumency thing. Much goodness. :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you- Yes Harry is developing his own, rather unusual technique! More to come soon :)

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