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Title: The Storm (Part 2) 03 Jul 2009 4:02 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, this chapter warmed the cockles of my heart. Snape softened a little towards Harry, fed him AND let him go flying! And all in the guise of a punishment. Too cute.

    This is so well written, and I'm really looking forward to your next chappie! Which I hope will be really soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

     Yes for Snape going to get an extra blanket and giving Harry some hot chocolate in the night were quite big steps. The flying thing was almost an apology which Snape wouldn't actually come out and say...I think his actions rather than what he says tell you the most about Snape. Mind you Harry won't be able to trust him for a while yet!

Title: The Storm (Part 2) 03 Jul 2009 3:59 pm
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed these chapters, Severus seems to be starting to see Harry more clearly.

    Author's Response: Yes and it's about time too! The occlumency might actually be a bit more sucessful soon as they begin to work together more :) Thanks for taking the time to review.
Title: The Storm (Part 1) 03 Jul 2009 3:49 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't believe that Snape would withold food as punishment. Well, yeah, it's Snape, I guess I can, but poor Harry. With his relatives having starved him, I feel bad for him.
Title: The calm before the storm 03 Jul 2009 3:44 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, Snape is still a hard taskmaster.

    I think that Snape was really worried for Harry, even though he wouldn't admit it! Too cute

    I love the way you keep Snape in character, while still allowing him to grow to care for Harry. I hate a too mushy Snape. Nice work. I can't wait to read more.
Title: The Storm (Part 2) 03 Jul 2009 1:04 pm
Reviewer: kari (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi,
    Loving your story so far! I like how Snape seems so much in character, and how (even when the chapter is not in his point of view) it is expressed in his vocabulary when interpreting Harry's actions. Letting Harry go flying is a very good way of diffusing the situation on his part, I did not expect it of him. He just couldn't resist that final remark though, coul he.. He must seem very unpredictable to Harry if he'll run hot and cold in the coming chapters, I'm curious how you'll deal with that next. Harry actually begging him seems very sad, especially because it is a result of him not having anyone to turn to at all for help. Hope you update soon of course :-)

    Author's Response:

    Hey thank you for your review:) Yes Snape is beginning to realise just how genuinely terrified Harry is of returning to the Dursleys. He is also beginning to feel slightly guilty about the whole thing. He needs to hurry up and tell Harry he wouldn't actually send him back there and that it was just a threat!:)

     

Title: The Storm (Part 1) 29 Jun 2009 11:53 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry! That was SO not a good idea! Brilliantly written though, it made me gasp! I thought Snape handled it quite well ie didn't hit him. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yes Snape as I see him would never hit Harry ... unless he really lost his temper to the point where he wasn't in control of his actions at all. And I think staying in control is very important to Snape so that wouldn't happen lightly. Also I think that Snape would pride himself on his Slytherin abilities to instill fear without resorting to force... Hence his bark is quite a bit worse than his bite so far. Mind you threatening to send a child back to abusive relatives is almost as bad as hitting him I think...
Title: The calm before the storm 29 Jun 2009 11:49 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am LOVING the fast updates! This was a really good chapter, I love how you bring Sirius into it too. The book was a good idea!

    Author's Response: Thank  you:) My problem is I have ideas for chapters faster than I can write them and I constantly find myself wanting to work on chapters further on in the story... Anyway hope you like the next chapter :)
Title: The calm before the storm 29 Jun 2009 1:27 am
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the story, hope they learn some cooperation soon. Severus is quite in character, though and I enjoy that.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing:)

    Yes there is a turning point which is approaching. Glad you like Severus so far hope I don't make you hate him too much in the next chapter...

     

     

Title: The calm before the storm 29 Jun 2009 12:51 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Oof. You say Harry refuses to cooperate the next time - I can certainly see why! I like your portrayal of Snape - he-s just as cruel as in canon, but you get some of the thought behind it so you understand a little. It's still inappropriate, but realistic. I like it! I want to see where this is going! :-)

    Author's Response:

    Yes he acts like a complete git but can always justify it in his own mind!

    Harry has been so patient so far but can he keep it up? hmm...

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: The calm before the storm 29 Jun 2009 12:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh! That makes me nervous.
    Harry is going to refuse to cooperate with Snape. Does he value his life? LOL!

    Great story, can't wait for more. I hope that Snape does get to know the real Harry and that things will go better.

    So maybe I missed it, but does Sirius actually have custody of Harry now, or was Harry just staying at his house?

    Author's Response:

    Poor Harry has tried so hard to do his best and get along... but he has reached his snapping point. And yes. It won't be pretty.

    Glad you're enjoying it. Things will get better though you may hate Snape before it gets to that point! Sorry!

    Well Harry is living with Sirius unoffically with Dumbledore's knowledge and but no one else (apart from the order) knows yet. At the moment we can assume that Harry and Sirius plan to continue for Harry to stay with him during school holidays. 

    Oh and I know it is a bit random (and convenient) that Sirius has gone abroad and left Harry but I do actually have plans for what he is doing to become part of the plot in later chapters.

    Thanks for the review :)


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