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Title: The uvarnished truth 10 Nov 2024 3:32 pm
Reviewer: SpiritTree (Signed) [Report This]

    Where is the next chapter? Please!

Title: The uvarnished truth 24 May 2023 9:57 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear! Has this never been finished???????

    I am going to cry...
Title: The uvarnished truth 14 May 2018 5:26 am
Reviewer: Avaya29 (Signed) [Report This]
    I know it's a long time since you've updated this and you're probably not even on this site any more, but this is one of the most coherent and dramatic stories I've read in a long time. I'd love to see how it goes from here! You've done really well showing how damaged Harry is from his upbringing – always trying to please people and always interpreting whatever people say in the most rejective way possible. I want to see how Severus comes to terms with this.

    Also, why not have Dumbledore use his Elder Wand to mend Harry's wand, as Harry does in canon?
Title: The uvarnished truth 02 Feb 2016 9:19 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I absolutly love this!! You are an Amazing writer. This is without a doubt One of the best, Most interessant, thrilling and in Charakter fanfiction Stories I ever read. I cried several times. . . More would
    Be fantastic, any Chance :)?
Title: The uvarnished truth 16 Dec 2015 12:39 am
Reviewer: jcj58 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I so wish you could finish this story. I have spent the day reading it, and loved every chapter!
Title: The uvarnished truth 07 Apr 2014 9:49 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely brilliant! This is the most amazing story. Too bad it is under HP because you totally own this - it could be yours to publish.

    So hoping you'll continue to post.
Title: The uvarnished truth 05 Aug 2012 10:36 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    More please? More more more!
Title: Father figure 05 Aug 2012 10:10 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVED this chapter! I hope you're continuing with this story ASAP! It was nice to see Harry and Connor get away from Hogwarts, and I like Connor as a character and as a friend to Harry.
Title: Chapter 33: Betrayal 03 Aug 2012 11:57 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Constructive criticism... sometimes you use the past tense in the wrong place. For instance a lot of times you say 'he was sat at the table' instead of 'he was sitting at the table' or simply, 'he sat at the table.' Just a thought! I hope you're still writing on this story and haven't abandoned it? I was in shock that Harry used IMPERIO!!!!!
Title: Limits 03 Aug 2012 10:11 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    You're not rubbish!

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