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Reviews For Sparks Will Fly
This was SO good! Snape's all protective and uncertain about Harry, and Harry's still having some fun even though he thinks he's going to die. And the Weasleys were such fun! XD Very very good! Oh, and this will stuff! How exciting! I can't wait til you update again! What will they find? Will it say that Snape's the dad? That would be good, cuz then Harry would know that he'd never have to go back to the Dursleys ever again! :D And what will they think when they hear that they'll need Sirius? When will Sirius come out?? This was very good and I'm all excited for the next chapter! And I have to give you fifty points for saying blue eyes are sexy! Thanks! (I have blue eyes XD) Actually, the whole little scene was great!! Please update when you can! Author's Response: Aw, now you know how I feel when I'm waiting for YOUR update!!!
Ffity points? Great. You are so generous. Yeah, I love blue eyes. My dad has them.
Yeah, I love the Weasleys, and especially the twins!! Thanks for your encouragement and I'm anxious for updates from you.
But what's this? Harry's looking different? Hmmm...and the will of James and Lily suddenly appears? And Sirius Black is sniffing about? (literally)I totally enthralled here!! I'm gunna go one to the next chapter! This one was brilliant, by the way! ;D Author's Response: Thanks Ivy. Yeah, they are "sort" of bonding, aren't they? Snape wants to make sure that he has time alone with Harry to warn him about Sirius, but also to make sure that he gets all the proper supplies for his class.
Yeah, Harry is changing, and that's all I'll say!
Thanks Ivy. No candy this time, or cookies?
And yay for friends! Ron and Hermione are just so funny when they argue. I really like that, for some odd reason. But, oh no! Now Harry DOES know something is up and he's gunna go off and try something! Very good Pandora! I'll try to read later today! Have a cookie! XD Author's Response: You must know that I have an incredible sweet tooth. Thank for the cookie!
Yeah, Harry reallly did need new clothes, didn't he? I love Hagrid too. He's like a big kid. Severus is certainly not wearing his heart on his sleeve, is he? Yeah, at least he's not being mean.
Oh, I love when Hermione and Ron bicker too. It shows how attracted they are to each other, even at that age.
Thanks Ivy. I want more chappies from you too. OOh, what kind of cookie?
Last chapter I forgot to mention that the little picture snake said something about "oh, well, you got Gryffindor from one parnet," or something like that, so...something's going on there I think... Oh! I wish I had more time to read this morning, but I have class! DX I'll have to read later. This is very good, and I give you a lemondrop! :) Author's Response: Oh, thanks for the lemondrop!!
Yeah, the Aurors are closing in on Sirius. Yeah, Fang wanted to play with Sirius I think, but Sirius is not taking a chance. Yeah. that was a very cryptic message from the snake, wasn't it?
Now, go to class! Talk to you later and thanks for reviewing.
But Harry, you little idiot! Don't go out looking for trouble! It always FINDS you! Oh no, I can just picture it now; it's Sirius Harry keeps seeing, isn't it? Oh no! What will happen with Sirius and Snape? Oh!! I want to go on, but I really have to go to bed! Curse the tiredness that causes me to sleep! I'll read tomorrow! (I love cat too!^-^) Author's Response: LO!! Yeah, Severus always hated Petunia. She gave him a very hard time when he was seeing Lily.
This is Harry we're talking about; the trouble magnet!! Ah, yes it's Sirius as anyone who has read POA! LOL!
Aw, you really need your sleep dear, but I hope that you're reading today!! =
Author's Response: Oh thanks for the points Ivy!!
Sev is just not really sure how to act with Harry anymore. All of his preconceived notions have flown out the window!
Thanks Ivy, I'm looking forward to more chappies from you too!
Author's Response: I think that the Barrister was in shock, that the Aurors found the box to begin with. He wasn't really privy to its whereabouts and it has been missing for twelve years. I think that John also was a little unsure how to proceed, afterall... this is the Minister of Magic.
Author's Response: Oh thanks Ivy! I'm really anxious for a chappie from YOU! :)
You portray the characters so realistically, they are so true and in-character. You show such depth with their emotions and thoughts. And your descriptions are vivid and interesting. Just the ordinary things, like the shopping trip, you keep it interesting and fun to read. I really enjoyed seeing Severus and Harry together in the shop, seeing Harry realize what potions mean to Severus and begin to see how gifted he is, how Severus tried to warn Harry without going into details. I love how you had Severus feel a pang when he realized that Harry possibly could have been talented at potions, if only Severus had not turned him from it so completely. I loved how even little things like lunch and ice cream mean a lot to Harry and he doesn't take it for granted. It was fun to see a little of the Weasleys, especially Fred and George. I haven't read the canon books in so long, that sometimes I forget how much I enjoyed them, how they could always lighten the mood and bring a smile to my face. Severus' emotions towards Harry are slowly changing, but he isn't going to give in easily, is he? Stubborn man...sometimes I want to shake him. Lola...whew, what can I say? And I can just imagine the looks on the faces when they learned that only Harry, Severus, and Sirius together can access the vault! Quite the dilemma indeed. I can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Oh thank you Kristeh. You always leave such lovely reviews, and I'm honoured that you say all these nice things because you are a wonderful, very talented writer, and your opinion means a lot to me. I think that Severus is very torn right now. He's trying to hold on to past grudges, but it's getting more difficult as he's forced to re-evaluate his opinions. Having seen first hand, that Harry is not the spoilt or arrogant child that he thought that he was, is making him very uncomfortable. Severus really doesn't know how to handle these feelings of concern or even pride, so he over-compensates by being too harsh at times. Yeah, I just had to put Fred and George in there. I plan on having a lot of them in the story. And the Weasleys too. I just love them. I'm actually getting excited myself at writing the scene where Sirius and Snape are thrown together. I can't wait, but I'll have to, and unfortunately, I hope my readers won't toast me for making them wait too!
Thanks Kristeh, and I'm just dying for the next chappie of Slave Child!!!
It's always fun to see Harry with Ron and Hermione. I loved how you describe Scabbers, especially in the photo with Ron trying to make him look at the camera and Scabbers tryng to wiggle away...the little sneak! What lovely descriptions of Diagon Alley! I could see it all so clearly in my mind while reading. And I loved that Severus wanted to take Harry to get his potions ingredients...and Harry wasn't completely averse to the idea, either, if he isn't ready to admit it. Now we've just got to find out more about the will and the box...the suspense is killing me! Wonderful chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one! Author's Response: Thanks Kristeh. It's not easy sometimes to incorporate my ideas with Canon.
I really do love the trio, and it's most fun when they're just hanging out, forgetting their troubles (well, maybe not in this story!) but just being normal young teenagers. Yeah, that little slimey rat. He really didn't want anyone to see his pic now did he, even if he was a rat. There are some that might put two and two together, like Sirius!
Thanks, I just tried to picture what it would look like in my mind. I think Severus is slowly coming to care just a teensy weensy bit. Just a little. But yes, he'd sooner give up his famous black robes than admit that he cares for Harry! More will come out about the will and the box soon...maybe! LOL! ( I love to torture)
Thanks Kristeh, and (tapping fingers on desk) waiting for your next chappie again!! |
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