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Reviews For Sparks Will Fly
Title: Changed Perceptions 31 Jul 2009 4:23 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful job again, Pandora!

    I love how Severus just can't stop seeing Lily in Harry. For so long he only let himself see James and it had a drastic effect on his thoughts and feelings towards the boy. But now that he has begun to see Lily, too, I hope that he will realize that Harry is also very much like his mother. He's already had to see that he was wrong about how Harry's 'family' treats him, so he's already got some cracks in the armor.

    Now, I hardly did anything at all with the descriptions. You wrote it yourself and it's great. I can really imagine it in my mind. And I wouldn't worry about the telly thing. If they can have a wireless in the HP world, why not a telly too? And anyway, by its very nature, an AU story does not have to comply with canon.

    I love Harry, here. He's vulnerable, yet also tough and determined and has great spirit. It's so sad when he is thinking of how he wishes he had a family of his own, like Ron. And he does like to live on the edge, doesn't he? Harry's much braver than I am, but then I guess that's why he's a Gryffindor.

    I can't wait to see what you have planned for us next!

    Author's Response:

    Aw, gee shucks! Thank you Kristeh, and it was fun writing that together. And yes you did help alot, and your description of Harry's reactions to Snape's quarters was hilarious.

     

    I don't think that Severus WANTS to see Lily in Harry, but the proof is before him now, and Harry is his own person, not the person that Severus imagines Harry to be.  Seeing the child that he imagined to be a pampered, spoilt prince, turn out to be anything but, is making Severus reevaluate all his pre-conceived notions about Harry Potter. When he realises that Harry is also abused, then Severus can't help but see the paralells to his own childhood.  Yes, Severus armor is definitely cracking.  He'll try hard to fight it though.

     

    Oh, I forgot about that wireless thing.  Anyway, if Dumbledore can apparate from Hogwarts in HBP, why can't Snape have a telly in my story?!  LOL!

    Harry dreams of having a family, and is very envious of Ron's simple, but rich life.  He'd trade fame anyday, to have parents that love and cherish him.

    Harry is just a little TOO brave for my liking, but if anyone can put a stop to his reckless behaviour, it's Snape!

     

     

     

Title: In the Dark of Night 31 Jul 2009 12:06 am
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice take on how the story could have gone.Looking forward to reading the next chapters I see you have posted when I've more time.

    Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! :)
Title: Changed Perceptions 30 Jul 2009 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Enjoying this story very much so far. Thanks!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  :)
Title: Changed Perceptions 30 Jul 2009 7:42 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, very stupid thing to do, Harry! And how creepy is it that Sirius has already found him? Even when you know he wouldn't hurt Harry, it makes you think...

    Author's Response:

    Well, Harry does like to throw caution to the wind, now doesn't he? Perhaps Sirius is keeping an eye on Harry. You know...to protect him from the greasy git, Snivellus to him!

     

     

Title: Changed Perceptions 30 Jul 2009 7:28 pm
Reviewer: hypercell (Signed) [Report This]
    Great, except for one thing....Electronics don't work in Hogwarts. Haven't you ever read Hogwarts, A History? (lol) Thus the telly wouldn't work....And why would snape even have a telly?

    Author's Response:

    Snape's father was a muggle, and Spinner's end is in a Muggle neighbourhood, and perhaps the telly is operating with a little aid of magic and not by electronrics soley.

     

    Besides this is AU, anything is possible in the world of fanfiction! That's why it's called fanfiction, because it doesn't have to follow Canon exactly. i can make my own rules!!

Title: Changed Perceptions 30 Jul 2009 6:30 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    love it! this is awesome! :) Snape's concern is lovely.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for sticking with the story, and btw, where's Muggleville?  Your last chapter was great.  Harry is so adorable in the story, and Snape handles him so well.
Title: Where is Home? 28 Jul 2009 9:08 pm
Reviewer: amainage (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm snape seems like he is going to be extremely stern. Many rules lol hope Harry can remember them all. He's bound to mess up and then the shoe drop lol nice chap.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Snape will be stern, but don't worry, there's not going to be THAT many rules!  Let's face it though, no matter how many rules Snape gives him, he's going to break them!  This is Harry Potter, we're talking about; if only to satisfy his curiosity.  Thanks .
Title: In the Dark of Night 28 Jul 2009 8:54 pm
Reviewer: amainage (Signed) [Report This]
    glad snape found him. well like it or not his secret is about to come out. nice chap.

    Author's Response:

     

    Yeah, a good thing, because Harry put himself in danger like that.

    LOL! Snape's or Harry's? LOL!

Title: Where is Home? 19 Jul 2009 5:45 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    All I have are questions. Has this will been found yet? How is it found after all these years? Does DD suspect that HArry might not be James' son?

    And most important of all...the Weasleys are away and Hedwig has gone to the Burrow. I take it she will know intuitively where HArry is and she will return to him.

    The adventure begins, huh?

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    No the will hasn't been found yet. The will will (hee hee) be discovered soon when the aurors are searching for Sirius. Dumbledore has no idea that Harry might not be James son. It will become clear later.

    Oh, you are so brilliant. I hadn't thought about the fact that Hedwig is at the Weasleys and they're gone.  Ooops, have to address that, don't I?   Yes, I guess that Harry will suddenly realise that Hedwig needs to come to Hogwarts.

    Yeah, some details will become clear as the story moves on.

Title: In the Dark of Night 19 Jul 2009 5:23 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    What a shock to run into Snape at the door of the Leaky Cauldron.

    Interesting start. Onto ch.2

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I'm sure that Snape is the last person that Harry expected, or wanted to see for that matter!

    Thanks. :)


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