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Reviews For Alea Iacta Est
Title: Luck Is Always With You 16 Jun 2011 4:06 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful chapter. Poor Harry.

    I absolutely loved that Snape didn't care that his legs were falling asleep on the bathroom floor. The thought that he would stay there however long necessary as long as his son was laughing, brought tears to my eyes. Very well done.

    And to wrap it up by having them cloud watching in the staff garden was such a great tension reliever.
Title: Luck Is Always With You 15 Jun 2011 4:21 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! Sunshine for Harry (Loved the owl/snitch debate!)

    Not as rough a chapter as some, but still challenging (as is to be expected in this AU) but very well done (those writing classes must come in handy from time to time ;-) )

    Thanks for posting!
    V.
Title: Luck Is Always With You 15 Jun 2011 3:16 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job Ella!

    Well, as I wrote a looooooooooooooooooonge review on your live journal, I'll try and keep it shorter here-it took a couple of HOURS to organize my thoughts and type your review on lj.

    I was glad to see this chapter. You did a fine job of handling Harry's hair loss. As I mentioned in your live journal, I was pleased to see the little details in your writing (the keeping a lock of hair, the rounded face from steroids). That's one thing I've always admired about your writing, even in early chapters there were a lot of little details that made it real. Like in one chapter you mention Harry is allergic to latex.

    I look forward to your next chapter!
Title: Luck Is Always With You 15 Jun 2011 12:46 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm glad you're back, Ella! Amazing chapter. Poor Harry, it's so hard for him to deal with. It's good to see how wonderful Severus is with him now, so patient and understanding and so committed to Harry's well-being.

    I loved how he offered to shave his own head, and how he told Harry about Lily shaving hers that time. You know, if Harry is truly bothered by it, isn't there some way that magic could compensate, even if it's just Severus casting a glamour that makes it appear that Harry still has his hair? Or would magic affect the disease in some way? Or maybe Harry can deal with the loss of his hair better than that. Maybe he can take it in stride.

    I loved the ending, too, with the cloud-gazing.

    Anyway, great job and I'm looking forward to more!
Title: Luck Is Always With You 15 Jun 2011 12:18 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that's was wonderful! I'm so glad that you're back Ella. The wait was well worth it though. Great chappie.

    I'm so happy that Severus and Harry are finally starting to bond as father and son.

    Welcome back with a bang! :)
Title: Luck Is Always With You 14 Jun 2011 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Vulpixer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *squeals and gently hugs Harry and Sev* Such a sweet chapter ending. Don't worry Sev, you're doing a great job. :3 I can't wait till they go to visit. I hope Molly has a lot of tissues on hand I'm sure there will be plenty of tears. Can't wait for the next chapter. :3 (psst. I kinda want Sev to shave his head as well.. ^^)
Title: Luck Is Always With You 14 Jun 2011 4:15 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful as usual. Our boys needed a chapter without too much drama and Voldy. Harry is having a hard time with trust right now, but if you look at all the adults in his life so far you can understand why. Sev is doing his best for his son. Really nice father/son moments in this chapter.
Title: Luck Is Always With You 14 Jun 2011 4:13 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    You're back! Such a touching chapter. I love it!
Title: Luck Is Always With You 14 Jun 2011 3:59 pm
Reviewer: Chandramas (Signed) [Report This]
    Ella sad, at least the first part, but really sweet chapter! I felt so sorry for Harry! Wonderfully written like usual. The moment where Severus told Harry about when he and Lilly shaved their head was very touching! And the final moment about they are watching the cloud is very very sweet!
Title: Luck Is Always With You 14 Jun 2011 1:56 pm
Reviewer: Frostbluete (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, a new chapter! I'm so glad to see you're still updating. I'm perfectly willing to wait, as long as you don't give this up. The story is great!^^

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