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Reviews For Alea Iacta Est
I feel like a bit of a broken record, but . . . Poor Harry! He just can't catch a break can he? Even Molly is trying to take him away from his "safe place." Do we get to see a "real fight" at the order meeting? Have fun on Black Friday--I used to work retail when I was still in school--now I just try to avoid any shopping areas at that time of year. V. Author's Response: I'm proud of him, too. I thought he was going to lose it when I went into writing the chapter, but as you saw he had other ideas. Molly knows how Severus can be towards students so it would be unrealistic if she didn't make sure Harry was okay with Severus, though I don't doubt it won't be the last time Harry has to answer those questions. I don't know about a "real fight" as in throwing punches, but the Order meeting will be very tense and I'm sure Severus will have much to say. Maybe our drunk friend, Remus, will even throw in a punch though it might have nothing to do with the current predicament. lol. Writing Remus as drunk was really just a sudden decision when I was writing it and now I'm happy that popped up in my mind because I get to have a little fun and play with that. Ugh, I don't think fun will cover Black Friday though I get to work what essentially is opening which is good though I do have to close the following day. I swear closing that weekend is torture. I had to close last year on Black Friday and the following Saturday and Sunday. Black Friday I was stuck at the mens denim walls for like six hours and it was pure torture having to refold hundreds of pair of jeans and try to get the walls looking somewhat presentable.
Author's Response: Yay, I was really hoping I got Molly right. In a way this chapter represents Sev's first stand as a parent and I'm happy he agreed to be written the way it turned out this chapter. Going into writing it, I thought he'd lose his temper, but he surprised even me. ;) Thanks!
"Harry had heard enough and Severus really didn't want his child to get upset over anything Molly might say" - this gave me the warmest little squiggly feeling, that little one you get in a really well written severitus just after he finds out Harry's is and starts saying and thinking it, and everytime he said something about 'his child' the squiggle got bigger, thanks for extra squiggles!!! and this - "I warn you his condition may shock you, but I must caution you against showing your shock to Harry" reminded me of when my grandma had cancer, she looked so different and I was told before I saw her the same thing word for word (although it didnt matter about not letting her see it, she was so great about it that we all felt like we could be honest in our reactions), but you wrote that really well too, especially Harry's apprehension and Molly's as well. It must be very strange for a wizard to hear about (or see) the effects of cancer, it's shocking enough when you've grown up knowing what it is. Sev's finally gonna get to that order meeting next, that'll be... uh... interesting. Probably a good thing sirius isnt around to make the situation ten times worse (imagine his reaction *shivers*) then again Dumbles is making things hard enough. I loved your last line too, I live fics that are like one big f*** you to wizarding society that expects a teenager to fight their war for them, and I cant imagine anyone being sneakier and more conniving than Sev to get Harry the freedom he should have had all along (it is a bit of a pitfall with the books isnt it, the fact that Harry's life has basically been decided by Trelawny of all people.) I continue to love the way you weave facts into this fic so full of imagination and fantasy like they belong there, it's so smooth to read and you're teaching me stuff I didnt know hehe (yes, I need a HP fic to teach me hospital terminology... I never said I was smart ^^) I really cant wait for more but I'll really try to breathe until you're able to update ^^ *drowns you in cookies* - muffins hurt less but you're in a cookie mood ^-^ (quite a good mood to be in actually... damn, we're out of cookies... hope if you gave in to the temptation to look you managed to find some ^^) and good luck with your busy thanksgiving working time... thing... man that came out horribly didnt it? But anyway, good luck - dont forget to smile lots and lots ^^ have fun x Author's Response: Wow, you have parts memorized? I don't think I even have parts memorized. lol. Yay for extra squiggles. I'm sure there'll be more to come. Word for word that's what you were told? That's awesome. Well, not about your grandma, but that I basically nailed in it a believable way. Grandmas can be crazy, at least one of mine is in a good way and I can totally see a grandma not caring about anyone else's reactions. Harry, though, well he's a teenager and at the stage where he's naturally self-conscious, but I think his upbringing made him more self-conscious than a lot of guys. About the meeting, Dumbledore will be enough, but remember there's a drunken Lupin that might cause some of his own fireworks. Of course, in his drunkenness they could be about anything. lol. Honestly, I didn't know i was going to end the chapter there, and then that line popped into my head, and it was like that's the end of the chapter. Sev will never let his teenage son fight Voldemort. I don't even think he'd let Harry fight him after he came of age. lol. Part of it is protectiveness, but I also think Sev knows he's done more than enough for the war, and with his son is where he's going to draw the line. I'm so glad it's smooth to read for you. Sometimes it's hard to balance the facts and not overload you with them, so I'm glad you aren't feeling overwhelmed by information. lol. And yay for learning. I love learning stuff when I read, so I guess I like to pass that on. Thanks!
Author's Response: Now that my fest fic is basically finished minus the revision, I have more time to focus on this story. :) I hope to get it out by the end of the week, but we'll see how it goes. Thanks!
It was nice to see Severus warming up to Harry, too, teasing him (but in a nice way this time!) and looking out for him. I really enjoyed the chapter! Author's Response: I think this chapter was essential for the development of Harry and Severus' relationship. They needed a break to get out and just do something for a change. Severus is certainly warming up to Harry, and I'm sure there'll be more teasing in the future. Thanks!
Wonderful chapter again! Author's Response: You brought away what I was trying to get across in this chapter. :) Harry isn't ready to face his friends yet, and you nailed the reason why. He's also a teenager, and so his insecurities are flaring up right about now. Poor boy. It'll take some time for him to come to terms with his illness and what it entails, but when Harry is ready he'll consent to seeing his friends. I'm sure by the time Harry sees them, Ron and Hermione will have regained their own composure or will face Molly's wrath. :)
I really liked the line about how he had saved Harry because he couldn't let Lily's last gift to world die. Poor Harry. Chemo is horrible; it sure seems like there should be a better way. I imagine Harry is shell-shocked, and terrified right now, the poor thing. Author's Response: Yay, I'm happy to hear you like Aurora. I messed with the parallel between Harry and Severus in canon already so I thought why not go all the way. ;) Plus, she'll bring some light into the story at times. I'm always excited when reviewers point out a line or moment that they particularly liked because I really like to know if you liked the same parts I do, so thanks! Yes, chemo is horrible. Unfortunately there's no magic potion that'll make everything alright. You're right about Harry being shell-shocked and terrified. He'll go through quite a bit emotionally in the next few chapters. Thanks!
Please, PLEASE keep updating! I have to say, the whole biological father subject was rather unexpected, in particular the reasoning behind it. I was wondering how you were going to pull that one off, since there are only a few good ways to do it, and most are overused. I've not seen your choice before, something that warms my heart. For I have read many, MANY FanFiction stories of all genres and pretty much seen 'em all. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction! On the one hand, he could feel betrayed by his father, Dumbledore and everyone else for keeping this from him and agreeing to give him up. On the other, he may also feel relieved to not only have a true father, and a biological one at that, but also that his growing feelings are not baseless. I do hope and ask though that you do not have him assent too easily to the entire thing. I.E., "Oh my gosh how could you DO that? Well, I guess it's okay, 'cause now I've got a real dad. Yay, you're my Dad! I LOVE YOU!" I don't think you'd do that, based on your previous writings, but I suggest that you beware of that trap. ;) Oo, which also brings me to the point of what is Harry now going to call him??? *evil grin* I can't see him calling him "Dad" too easily, at least at first, making for lots of angst!!!! Whoot! (I live for angst, couldn't ya tell? ;)) Avidly awaiting your next release! *twists hands anxiously* Is it there yet? (five mins later) Is it there yet? (five mins later) Now? (Two minutes later) NOOOOOWWWWWW?........ Don't keep us hanging long! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I, too, have read probably too much fanfic, and I try to steer away from the "patterns" that turn into somewhat of a cliche as much as possible because I like to twist things up. I'm glad you're enjoying my story, and yay for being in your Top Ten of all time. :) Sometimes you do happen to stumble upon good things. I think Harry's reaction will prove to be interesting. Don't worry he won't assent too easily. He'll go through a wide variety of emotions, and I just hope Sev won't lose his patience with him. Harry won't be calling Sev dad right away. I think it'll take some time for both of them to adjust and if a child never remembers calling anyone dad I bet it's even harder to start using the term. After all, dad to Harry is like a foreign concept and word. As far as updating goes *sighs* I'm in a bit of a writing rut. My inspiration has fled me for a bit, but don't worry an update will hopefully be posted by the end of the week. I just need to get my prompt fest fic out of the way first before I turn to the next chapter of this. However, it's likely I'll be stuck at home all day tomorrow and Tuesday because of Hurricane Ida, so I should be gaining writing time. :) Yay. PS: I hope you didn't fail anything because you were too busy reading. I'm flattered that was the case, but as Severus would say your education is important (Not from me because I'm the worst possible procrastinator, but I have actually started studying for my GRE! Go me! lol). Thanks again!
"crusty eye junk"- I liked this because that's what I call them and it just kinda made be smile. had a bad day (again) and I needed to read something like that! :D "he looked forward to shocking the man and messing up his real-life chessboard."- TAKE THAT DUMBLES!! I can't WAIT 'til Sev starts messing this up too! Ha ha ha ha ha! Oh!! This is gunna be so good! I can't wait to see what Molly does and then what Severus does and then what Dumbledore does! And when is Harry going to find out that Snape's his father? I can't wait! Update as soon as you can please! Wonderful chappie!! ^_^ Author's Response: Yay, someone actually didn't mind the cliffy too much. :) Dumbledore is totally going to have his plans backfire on him. It's going to be fun to write. I'm sure Sev's temper has been lying in wait, just waiting for an excuse to explode. I'm happy that little reference made you smile. I've been having a rather exhausting and stressful week. Well, I worked/had class six days in a row and then by Monday when I had a complete day off I was just emotionally exhausted, so I've been kinda chilling the past few days. Well, except for last night where I had a mini-freak out realizing that it's already November and my grad school applications need to be in soon. I thought I'd need to write a paper to send in to some of them, but thankfully it's not as bad as I thought. Most of the deadlines are a few weeks later than I thought, and I started my GRE studying this week with a bit more of success than I initially thought. Now, I just need to continue my GRE studying and figure out what scenes/excerpts I want to use for my fiction submissions. As you can guess by this reply, the chapter hasn't even been started yet. *sighs* I hope to work on it some tonight if Game 6 of the World Series doesn't last all night.
Author's Response: For a while there, the website was acting a bit strange, so I'm assuming the site ate your original review. ;) I'm happy to hear you really liked the chapter, and did you notice anything else? You're the lucky winner of the 350th review! Umm the prize is, uh how about some of my weather? We reached 79 today, so I'm sure we can afford to send you up some degrees. I've been waiting for it to get cold for like ever it seems. Stupid Southern weather. Grr. Though it'll be nice for the local Renaissance faire I'm going to next weekend. I've never been to one before and I've always wanted to go, so I'm excited. Thanks again, Ivy! |
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