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Title: Fight or Flight 25 Aug 2009 4:14 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that Severus let Harry fly one last time!!! Harry is worming his way into his snarky's professor's heart. Harry is afterall Lily's son! I enjoyed the fact Snape is trying to make Harry understand that fighting is half the battle. Very good chaper! Can't wait for the next!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I thought it was only appropriate Harry got to fly one last time. The next chapter is about 2/3rds done, I think. It was going to include the Hickman procedure, but Harry, Sev, and Flurry had other ideas, but I think you guys will like the next one a lot. =)
Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 24 Aug 2009 11:36 pm
Reviewer: jam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Could Harry's fear of needles be the cause of his breakdown?

    Author's Response: Perhaps, you'll have to keep reading to find out...
Title: Fight or Flight 24 Aug 2009 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you did great! Very detailed, especially how he felt with Severus hugging him :) lol sending visions with your chapter would be awesome.

    low 65 congrats! I wish it would get warm here we need to trade its cloudy and cold but i have to keep the window open because my grandmother loves perfume and I HATE it so must let the smell out...how much longer will it linger T_T I'm freezing here!

    LOL well can't wait for more! *smirks* hehe I knew I wouldn't like Hermonie and Ron in this chapter muahaahaha *coughs* erm you didn't hear that lol

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you liked all the details. Wouldn't sending visions be awesome? 

    I'll trade you weather though I bet within a week you'll want to switch back. We just don't have heat, we have like super high humidity.

    I totally heard that concerning Hermione and Ron, but I won't hold it against you. There's always characters people don't like, and well I don't think I liked them either in this chapter.  

Title: Fight or Flight 24 Aug 2009 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Another update!

    This was good. And as I seem to do in every fic that I read, I am finding Ron and Hermione to be annoying. But like I said, I seem to do that in most fics. ;-)

    Harry seems to be getting very close to Snape, and fast. I wonder if he even realizes it. His dependency is growing and I suppose later on we will really see how much.

    I think ya got the emotions right. I wanted to hug Harry, but since Snape was already doing that, it was okay that I couldn't. :D

    Snape already knew what Madam Pomfrey did, so why was he so angry now? His reaction just didn't seem to make much sense to me there.

    But I love how Harry got to go flying. And I don't know abut him, but I will personally be glad when the castle empties out. ;-)

    So I suppose he'll get his Hickman line the next chapter. That should prove to be... interesting.

    I'm still enjoying this and looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Ron and Hermione can be quite annoying, can't they? I seem to find them annoying in most fics, too. 

    I don't think Harry realizes how close he's getting to Snape. I think that if anyone made the effort to do as Sev is in caring for Harry, they'd be quickly rewarded because in a way Harry is starved of affection from an adult. He has all these basic needs that he doesn't realize he's missing out on and that subconsciously he's waiting for.

    Aww, you can hug Harry after Sev is done. I'm happy to hear I got the emotions right.

    Harry's happy he got to go flying, too and is with you on the castle emptying out.

    As for the consistency error, *calls in the consistency fairy* I totally somehow thought I left the end of chapter 10 more ambiguous. I can't believe I did that, but I should have the end of chapter 10 fixed so that error is rectified in a few hours as I think the reveal works better in chapter 12. 

    I also hope to start working on chapter 13 later today so we'll see how fast I get it written.  

Title: Fight or Flight 24 Aug 2009 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a wonderful chapter as usual. I love how Snape is starting to care about Harry.

    You just write so beautifully, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I love that you think I write so beautifully. It's awesome to hear. Chapter 13 is proving to be a highly anticipated one so let's hope I get it written fast. 
Title: Fight or Flight 24 Aug 2009 4:05 pm
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter, but I do have one question. Why did Severus get so mad when Harry told him that Madam Pomfrey had told his friends. Was he just acting like he didn't know already so Harry wouldn't get more upset, because he was already aware that she had told Harry's friends. (chapter 10)

    Author's Response: *Sighs* That's a very good question. Somehow, I totally thought that I left that part in chapter 10 ambiguous, which I can't believe I did since I checked other things for consistency. I'm calling in the magic consistency fairy to fix the end of chapter 10 because I think the reveal works better in chapter 12, so I should have that fixed in a few hours. Thanks for pointing it out! I would've went like the whole story without realizing it unless I decided to read it all for myself! =)
Title: Fight or Flight 24 Aug 2009 11:27 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter
    It's good to see them bonding
    Update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to start working on the next chapter today. 
Title: Fight or Flight 24 Aug 2009 8:53 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    well despite everything I do hope madam pomfrey realizes her wrongdoing, mistake or not.

    Author's Response: She'll realize her wrongdoing. It's not like Sev is going to go easy on her. 
Title: 514 23 Aug 2009 1:43 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape being jealous over his cat is cute "._."

    Author's Response: Thanks. He won't admit it, but he cares about that fluffy little monster a lot. 
Title: Floating Peacefulness 23 Aug 2009 1:29 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Dumble is so... annoying! (keeping it PG-5, heh)

    Author's Response: I think you'll have more to say about him soon...

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