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Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 23 Aug 2009 6:37 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    I am loving this story! I find that it is VERY well written and I can sort of see where this might be heading. Great job! Let's see...snowcone...hummm...your's sounds great, but I'd love to try a pumpkin flavored one...pumpkin is awesome! :-D P.S....your're my first "favorited," "get updates" one!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much! I'm happy to hear you have some inklings where I might be headed. It means I've slipped just enough clues in. Oh, and I'm totally happy to be your first favorited and get updates one. =)

    As for your snow come, hmm do they make pumpkin flavoring? If so you can have that, but if not it's strawberry and grape for you!  

Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 22 Aug 2009 6:26 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Anonymous) [Report This]
    " Author's Response:
    LoL. Do you have something against Hermione and Ron? "

    :) at the moment yes lol!
Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 21 Aug 2009 7:59 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have really been enjoying this story and the character dynamics you have been developing through it. It is heartrending in places and overall enjoyable.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I hoped it read as heart rendering in places, and it's great to hear it did. 
Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 21 Aug 2009 7:10 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. I bet that harry breaks down when they try to insert the permanent tube into his chest. Loved how Snape is taking care of Harry. The shopping scene was great. Thanks ofr the update! Love the story.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Good guess. Sev is doing a good job, isn't he? 
Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 21 Aug 2009 6:06 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for your understanding and caring charactizations of a cancer patient getting ready for treatment.......I went through a lot of what Harry is three years ago with breat cancer, even a Hickman port.......it's kind of like I'm reliving he fear, but from the oher side. Three years cancer free! I await your next chapter holding my breath.

    Author's Response: Thanks again. I'm glad to hear it's connecting with you emotionally because good fiction does. =)
Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 21 Aug 2009 5:10 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    yum snow cones :) strawberry and lemon! lol.

    hm...I bet it's his friends that trigger it XD lol I'm evil

    Author's Response:

    LoL. Do you have something against Hermione and Ron? 

    Passes a strawberry and lemon snow cone to you. =) 

Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 21 Aug 2009 3:26 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Continuing to progress well. Looks like we'll learn a LOT about leukemia, eh?

    his breakdown? either his friends or the needles, although Dumbledore might end up causing it somehow as well...

    Author's Response: Yeah, you'll learn a lot about chemo just like Harry is. 
Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 21 Aug 2009 2:49 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    The care and hard work you are putting into this story is obvious throughout this chapter. I have no idea of what will cause Harry's eventual breakdown because there are so many things that could be the straw that breaks the camel's back. So I will just continue to wait and read. Keep up the good work and don't worry about how soon you get the next chapter posted. Fiction of this high quality is worth waiting for.

    Bravo!

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response: Thanks! *smiles* Still, I plan to get the next chapter up within a few days. 
Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 21 Aug 2009 2:18 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! I was just thinking about this story at work this afternoon. Wishing you'd update, but thinking it'd be too soon. So surprise for me! :D

    I really liked this chapter. Severus was so patient with Harry and I loved that. It was both somewhat cute and yet incredibly sad when he was trying on clothes. He's small already, but when he saw himself in the mirror, that was so heartbreaking.

    Severus picking out hats and vitamins and such for Harry's future use was also incredibly sad. It instills this bit of dread inside you... you know what's coming, yet it is still depressing.

    You seem to really know what you are talking about in this regard and it shows. I'm still enjoying this story so very much! Looking forward to the next chapter!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm happy to hear it read somewhat cute and sad at the same time because that's what I was going for. Dread is good, and you should be feeling it. 
Title: A Colorful Array of Choices 20 Aug 2009 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Neat chapter, it brings the human in Snape out. As for your review about Poppy, she is a professional and a healer that has seen war so finding a diagnosis for a dieing student shouldn't be that much of a shock, I'm sure others have died during her career--quidditch for example is a violent game--let alone during the last war; it was just too obvious a plot device. That said I would bet the snow cone that Hermione is the one to trigger Harry's breakdown--she is just that insensitive and bullheaded.

    Author's Response: You'd bet your snow cone? We'll just have to wait and see. And surprise, Snape is human, should we alert the presses?

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