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Title: Chapter 14: Uprooted Truths 18 Nov 2009 6:47 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Noooo! Oh sorry, great chapter, still very cute (arent baby Harry and daddy Sev adorable?) but noooo! I hope Dumblebum's plans fail miserably and he sees the error of his ways in splitting them up because really, who's better for little Harry than Sev?

    I'd love it if Harry had to naturally grow up again and could somehow avoid all the voldy crap he was saddled with last time he was a baby, it's never seemed fair that a kid should deal with the evil plaguing the whole wizarding world, it would be like expecting a teenager to win the war on terror, just a tad ridiculous ^^

    I absolutely loved the gorgeous little scenes you always manage to slip in there:

    'Lazily, Severus stated the password to the Headmaster’s office and went up the stairs still tickling the baby who was gurgling and grinning merrily'

    'he was really seeing Severus Snape rocking and cradling a little baby, let alone cooing and saying sweet nothings to the child'

    And seriously, how annoying is Hermione being?! At least Remus was patient and Draco's keeping quiet (for now). Ok, rant's over. Please keep the cute moments coming, you got me hopelessly addicted ^^.
    Have fun ^^ x

    Author's Response:

    Oh my goodnees! Sprout, you just TOTALLY made my night/early morning here! I get finished with a crappy paper and low and behold a wonderful review is waiting for me! Ten points to you!

    But with regards to the review, you are getting my story EXACTLY how it's supposed to be! I'm absolutely THRILLED about that! You're asking all the right questions, seeing all sides, understanding the emotions I wanted to portray...what this review means to me just....just....*give bearhug* This is wonderful! This is really the highlight of my day! And I TOTALLY agree with everything you've said here in this review. I agree that it's pretty terrible to make children fight your battles for you. Not only is it just plan wrong, it's stupid even. And I'm UBER glad you liked my little fluffies here and there. I always want to show that Sev is a good person behind all that snark and CAN be a good father. And yeah, Draco's being quiet, Remus is passed out, and Hermione's still being annoying. I'm glad you feel that way about her, because that's want I wanted to go for.

    Thanks so much for the review and putting up with my big long rant too! Thanks so much again!! :D

Title: Chapter 14: Uprooted Truths 18 Nov 2009 12:47 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this story it is wonderful. I was concerned about harry's eating but hope he will have more solids, if only for the delight of having Severus covered in them, I love a bit of Dumbledore bashing and he deserves here hateful man. Thank you so much

    Author's Response: You're welcome! And don't worry overly much about Harry's eating. I'm learning more about children. I don't have any kids myself and am the youngest in the family, so...yeah, I'm a bit inexperienced in this area, but I'm getting better! ^_^ Thanks so much for the lovely review Fmh!
Title: Chapter 14: Uprooted Truths 17 Nov 2009 6:51 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response: Thank ya kindly!! Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 14: Uprooted Truths 17 Nov 2009 5:37 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    AH! Severus you silly man you left too early you didn't floor Dumbledore! You did a wonderful job with Remus though.

    LOL Darn I would have thought Hermonie contacted Black but then again we'd all know he'd go bananas.
    I can't believe Dumbledore is still thinking of taking Harry away!
    (pulls out a spoon--gonna stab Dumbledore if he comes too close--lol I saw on a drama yesterday of a girl who was going nutty over her boyfriend she just dumped, she went on a blind date and there was a tea spoon on the table but in her mind she saw it as a knife and spooned her date lol it was funny. Poor guy though he didn't do anything.)
    It would be fun if Harry talked :D I can imagine the headache Sev's gonna get lol!

    Author's Response: HA!!! For a moment with the spoon thing I thought you were referring to the Sheriff of Nottingham (which Alan Rickman played) when he threats to cut out Robinhood's heart with a spoon. You're story's funny though too! But agreed, poor guy...oh well! ^_^ But yeah, Sev left a little too early 'cuz he was having a hissyfit. Thanks so much for another awesome review Fairner!! :D
Title: Chapter 14: Uprooted Truths 17 Nov 2009 4:39 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh, the cat's out of the bag.

    That was certainly an interesting way for Severus to find out how he became Harry's father although it was rather insensitive of Dumbledore to tell the story for the first time with Remus there as well.

    Ugh, only a week left? I'm anxious for Harry to turn back, but I don't want Severus to lose him.

    Grr at Dumbledore. I was so looking forward to Severus ruining his plans. Maybe next chapter?

    Author's Response:

    I really can't help myself by doing the unexpected sometimes. Everyone thought that Dumbles was going to hear about Harry this chappie, but I couldn't help but twist it a bit, make it a bit more interesting, you know? But yes, the cat's out and Remus was sure in for a shocker. And what else would you expect Dumbledore to do? He's just nuts sometimes. And Severus has got to work extra hard in the future to keep Harry 'cuz not only does he have to worry about Remus telling Sirius and then Dumbledore, but he's got the Dark Lord riding down his throat too! But Dumbles plans won't quite go how he expects them...Thanks for the review Ella! Always a pleasure to hear from you!

Title: Chapter 14: Uprooted Truths 17 Nov 2009 4:33 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Grrrrr cliffie. But I forgive you, 'cause the chappie was so much fun. Snape's protectiveness is wonderful - at once funny, sweet, and edgy. Much fun. Poor Lupin. He's got a lot to think over. :0)

    Author's Response: XD I like to be cruel sometimes, and Remus bore the brunt of it this time. XD And I'm really happy to hear that you found it all funny, sweet, and even edgy. That's what I was going for now that the stories starting to come to a close. Thanks so much for the wonderful review, RhiannaT! :D
Title: Chapter 14: Uprooted Truths 17 Nov 2009 4:25 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    snape and harry need to stay together, they need each other....love this story

    Author's Response: Snape and Harry do make a cute pair don't they? Don't worry yourself overly much. Thanks for the review DazzlingD!
Title: Chapter 14: Uprooted Truths 17 Nov 2009 4:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw no! They just can't take Harry away from Severus. Would Dumbledore be so cruel? I hope not! Great chapter Ivy, and i ljust loved when Remus fainted.

    Author's Response: Yay! Thanks Pandora! I'm always so glad to hear from you! ^_^ Glad you liked it too! And don't worry 'bout Dumbles too much. Things aren't going his way at the moment... Thanks again for the review!!
Title: Chapter 13: Unethical Practices 16 Nov 2009 2:04 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, what a Slytherin Severus Snape is, giving out harmless candy when he knows nobody would eat it. mwahahahahaha... I bet Dumbledore was at the other end... or Hermione... Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: XD Glad you liked the Slytherin-ness. ^_^ I try to keep that going. Good guess, and you'll find out next chappie. Thanks for another review!!
Title: Chapter 13: Unethical Practices 12 Nov 2009 7:40 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    This is becoming cuter and cuter every chapter - especially with Sev noticing Harry's adorableness ^^

    I just loved "But when hearing his father’s voice, little Harry grinned toothlessly around his bear’s ear". The image it brought to mind was just too gorgeous, as was Sev walking in to see Harry rolling around on the couch ^-^

    I cant believe you ended such a lovely chapter that way though! The whole thing was positively exploding with fluff and then you manage to sneak a cliffy in the last sentence, very sneaky ^-^ - my thought is that it's likely Draco, but then I could be wrong and it was really a hufflepuff returning for his lemon drop (great idea by the way ^^)

    Cant wait for more, as always - this fic is very much like a drug or one of little Harry's giggles, always leaves you wanting more ^^
    hope life is being kind or that it gets kinder (especially if you're in need of smiles) - smile anyway, once you start you cant stop (although you look a little crazy if you do it somewhere like a funeral... I would assume...)
    have fun ^^ x

    Author's Response:

    XD Hahaha! Thanks sprout, you really did just cheer me up a great deal! And Congratulations!! You're review number 200!! For that I give you candy and flowers! You're so lucky!

    I'm really glad you liked the images in here. I thought Sev's cold heart needed to warm up a bit and he's definately falling in love with his child, the way a father should. And I can't help being sneaky! I'm Slytherin after all, it's what I do. But I can't tell you who was behind the door until next chapter though. I wanted people to start thinking. I like it when people ask questions or guess at something. Let's me know you're actually reading.

    Thanks again for another lovely review! I always love hearing from you! And this really did make me smile, so thanks so much!


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