Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 6: Unequivocal Delight 20 Aug 2009 5:23 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very funny chapter hahahaha
    Update soon

    Author's Response: ^^ Thanks! I'll try!
Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 19 Aug 2009 1:44 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Nooooooo >_< he can't tell Harry! So mean, well I hope Harry remembers all of this lol! Can't wait for the next chapter please update when you can!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review! And don't worry about Harry and Sev overly much. I'll update when I can. You get...cherry pie! Enjoy as you wait! ^^

Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 19 Aug 2009 1:43 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    More parts I loved,

    “I HATE YOU FOR THIS OLD MAN!”

    ' After another ten minutes, tears started to fall from the Potions Master’s eyes as well. '

    I can imagine that happening, being unexpectedly thrown into a situation with no experience with babies, and one that wont stop crying I think I'd start to cry faster than Severus did. I felt sad for him there. But then he got his hair pulled...owch. >_<

    And Umbridge bleh! lol!

    Author's Response: I know, I'm so mean to Sev! I actually pretty bad with small children as well, as sad as that is. And I'm trying to have Sev react as I might in certain situations, so I'm glad you're enjoying his reactions. And yes, Umbridge is terrible, isn't she? She's in for a time. *Muhahahahahahaha!!!* Have a smoothie!
Title: Chapter 3: Unbearable Brat 19 Aug 2009 1:37 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVED these lines:

    “Ten points from Gryffindor, Mr. Weasley, for interruption!”

    ' The Potions Master dreamed about being a housewife that night. '

    LOL I laughed and my sister asked me what I was laughing about and when I read them to her she started laughing too! I really love the story off to review for the other chapters!

    Author's Response: Aww! Glad you guys are enjoying! I wanted this to be a humorous story. Glad you like it! ^^
Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 19 Aug 2009 1:36 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Albus is an ass. Sev does not have to give up his son.

    Can't wait until Sev turns the tables on Albus... AND that FRAKING prophecy.

    Author's Response: Lol Yes, yes Dumbles is. Glad you're waiting patiently for Sev to strike. Thanks for the review! You get... apple pie! ^^
Title: Chapter 5: Undeniably Vexing 18 Aug 2009 9:34 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    I would be INFURIATED at Dumbledore if I was in Snape's position! I think you dealt with their talk really well though! This line just cracked me up:

    “But she thought I was dead, thanks to Potter, and she probably would have wanted me to know that I had…that I had a…a…”

    “Son?” the Headmaster filled in.

    “Yes, yes, one of those,” Snape spat.

    I hope my pie is a nice flavour...

    Author's Response: Don't worry 'bout Snape too much. He IS a Slytherin after all. Dumbles won't be in control too much longer. *evil grin* But I'm surprised that you're the first one to comment on that particular line. I thought that was the best line (personally) You actually seem to pick up on my more subtle humor. Yay for you! Ten points to you. And let's see...I'm running out of different flavors...How about pumpkin? or maybe...custard? Have your pick! ^^
Title: Chapter 4: Underestimated Resentment 18 Aug 2009 9:28 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    *quick commercial break* ROFL!

    Snape is Harry's dad!!! That is SOOOO cute!!! I really didn't expect that!

    *chants* smoothie, smoothie, smoothie!

    Author's Response: Yeah...*rubs back of neck* not sure what brought on the commercial...might have been the lack of sleep or something...glad you liked it though ^^ You're actually the first to comment on that. *shrug* I thought it was kinda funny, if not kinda lame. (I'm a lame person deep down...and a nerd *sigh) But I'm glad I surprised you, and yes, have a smoothie!! It's on me!
Title: Chapter 3: Unbearable Brat 18 Aug 2009 9:27 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    I want some corn! The last line was HILARIOUS!

    I did not like it and I did not hate it. I loved it!

    Author's Response: Aww! Thanks again! I'm so happy that you're enjoying it! ^^ And I'm a little surprised everyone liked the last line since I just threw it in. Thanks again for the review!! Have some corn! (heaven knows we have too much *groan*)
Title: Chapter 2: Unsavory Arrangements 18 Aug 2009 9:26 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good? No. Inbetween? No. Bad? No. Perfection is the only word you can use to describe it!

    Snape torture is so much fun to read? What better torture implement than a cute little baby?

    Author's Response: Aww! Thank you very much!! That means a lot to me. I'm glad you liked it! And I'm so glad you like Snape torture to *evil grin* Thanks for reviewing!! XD
Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Problem 17 Aug 2009 3:26 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    My favourite bit had to be Harry's appearance! ;) But a close second would be Dumbledore looking 'bit too feeble at that moment to be believable'. Well done! x

    Author's Response: lol Thanks! Glad you liked it! XD

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