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Reviews For The Dark, the Light, and the Grey
Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffhanger. :) I like ending chapters with them, it's fun. I'm glad you liked the chapter and the ceremony. I hoe you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for your review!
Hope Harry is going to be okay. Great chapter and the wedding ceremony was interesting. Author's Response: Harry will survive. Some how. Glad you like the wedding ceremony, it was very fun to write. Thanks for your review!
P.S. - I don't know if you're a good artist or not, but maybe you could draw a pic of the new Harry? =D Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the next chapter, it ends on a cliffy too. :) I'm glad you liked this chapter and I hope you like the future ones. I am drawing a picture of Harry. Once I'm happy with it, I'll post it on the Internet. Thanks for your review!
Great chapter xxx Author's Response: Nice to know you enjoy the story that much. I did update on FanFiction.net. Glad to know you liked it. Thanks for your review!
Love this story, So unique. Author's Response: Bellatrix's other husband is explained in chapter seven. I'm glad you love this story. Thanks for your review!
Imagine, that Bellatrix want more children, but with Severus or with Rodolphus? Great chapter, looking forward to more. Author's Response: I'm drawing a picture of Harry with his apperance changes and he'll be described more in the next chapter. Bellatrix will also do more explaining about her future children in the next chapter. I'm glad you liked this chapter and I hope you like the next one. Thanks for your review! Author's Response: I'm drawing a picture of Harry with his apperance changes and he'll be described more in the next chapter. Bellatrix will also do more explaining about her future children in the next chapter. I'm glad you liked this chapter and I hope you like the next one. Thanks for your review! Author's Response: I'm drawing a picture of Harry with his apperance changes and he'll be described more in the next chapter. Bellatrix will also do more explaining about her future children in the next chapter. I'm glad you liked this chapter and I hope you like the next one. Thanks for your review!
Thanks! I'm lookng forward to the next chapter. Author's Response: I'm glad you like the idea. But it's not mine, this is an answer to a challenge. I hope you like the next chapters. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: I'm glad you agreed with Sev. The sorting will be in a few chapters. :) Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was sweet. Thanks for your reveiw!
It was smart of Sev to have Bella make the Unbreakable Vow that way he can be sure what side she is on. I wonder what kind of teacher she would make? Oh and a suggestion-if you're going to have a character thinking while you use dialogue, it's best to put the character's thoughts in italics. Less confusion that way. Author's Response: Bellatrix would defiantly be an interesting teacher. There won't be any scenes of her teaching until later. Thanks for the tip and your reveiw! |
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