Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Just a father
Title: Why not? 02 Oct 2009 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was very good. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response:

    Dramagirl007,

    Thank-you, I'm glad you thought. I will, thanks and I'm updaing in just a moment.

    -Mel :)

Title: Why not? 30 Sep 2009 6:24 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, very nice. I really like how the "why not" was never really answered. I also like how you've conveyed Snape's emotions about how he doesn't think he could have a relationship like what Harry wants because it's never worked in the past. He hasn't really been close with anyone for the longest time and so this will be really hard for him. I hope he makes the potion though; with time, I'm sure all of those things would sort themselves out.

    Nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    P.G,

    Thank-you! Yeah it wasn't really a question but more like two innocent words leading to more questions. You're spot on about Snape and how hard this will be for him. You know what they say; "Everything is okay in the end. If it's not okay than it's not the end" so yeah, I'm sure they'll be able to work things out eventually...bit by bit with time. Thanks, and will update soon!

    -Mel :)

Title: Why not? 29 Sep 2009 9:56 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great work

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Thanks!

    -Mel :)

Title: Why not? 29 Sep 2009 2:32 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Why not, two innocent little words. Or I think they are, usually when I imagine someone asking why not, it's a child being curious...but now that I think about it, it also could be a annoyed why not let me do this lol! But for Harry and Severus I'll stick to my first thought.
    Ah bother, bother here came complicated--Ol' Moldy Shorts! XD

    Author's Response:

    Fairner,

    Yes, two single words that are seemingly so innocent. I think it's more along the lines of both of your thoughts: a child being curious but also annoyed that he cannot do something he wants to. Although yes, it's mostly the first option in their case :P. Hehe. Yeah, more complications indeed.

    -Mel :)

Title: Why not? 28 Sep 2009 8:16 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    When I wanted to go on, I realized that I could not go on this time. :( But this was very good. Come on Sev, just take the plunge!! Everyone knows he wantes to be a dad! And poor Harry, doesn't know what to make of Snape's words. Poor kid...but I really liked this and I look forward to your update! :D

    Author's Response:

    Ivy-green,

    Heh, yeah but I will be updating soon so fret not :P. Thank-you for each of your reviews! Severus wants to take the plunge but you know know what he's like! They're both not used to getting happiness for themselves and are unsure, confused and a whole lotter other things but they'll get there ;). Although you're right, Sev does want to be a dad heh. Cute, in my option. I'm pleased to hear it and as I said: will update soon!

    -Mel :)

Title: Why not? 28 Sep 2009 8:08 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Snape. So confused. He should just make that potion and Go For IT!

    Author's Response:

    Mithrilandtj,

    Yeah I agree with you there! If only it were that simple for him.

    -Mel :)

Title: Spinner's Christmas 28 Sep 2009 7:30 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    ^-^ Yay for Snape having a heart! And for all the presents! They sounded really cool. And I LOVED the line "permission to hug, sir?" That's fantastic! XD I really liked that! If you'll let me, I might just have to use that in one of my stories. I'd give you credit and all. OH! And Harry called Severus 'dad'! The plot thickens! Off to the next chappie! :D

    Author's Response:

    Ivy-green,

    Everyone seems to love that line, I'm pleased! Thanks though. You may use it in your stories, although as you said...credit and all. Oooh yup, the plot thickens. Thank-you.

    -Mel :)

Title: Having a heart 28 Sep 2009 7:08 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't be such a grinch, Sev! You like Christmas with Harry, and you know it! Very cute! I liked the hugging. Cute,cute,cute! XD Off to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Ivy-green,

    Sev, a grinch? NEVER! Haha, well he is allergic to happines, remember? It's a medical condition! ;). He is enjoying it though. Hugging is always well-liked, even by me! Thanks.

    -Mel :)

Title: Why not? 28 Sep 2009 6:56 am
Reviewer: Question (Anonymous) [Report This]
    how come the chapter words are all in bold?

    Author's Response:

    Question,

    This wasn't something I did. It was just an annoying thing that occurs sometimes when I update, sorry. I fixed it now though :P.

    -Mel :)

Title: A solution 28 Sep 2009 6:30 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    ^-^ Sev just needs to get the stick out of his butt sometimes. He and Harry would have a really good Christmas together if they could get past the awkwardness. And Dumbles is an tricky one, isn't he? lol This was good! Well, I'm off to the next chappie...

    Author's Response:

    Ivy-green,

    *sniggers at comment*, ahhh yeah, guess that can be true. Although he had good reason. The awkwardness will remain for now since it's still new for them both, unfortunatly. Haha, "dumbles" funny name, I like. And yes he is. Thanks.

    -Mel :)


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