Come on Sev, you can do it! Make Harry smile! XD This was really good. I liked it a lot. Yay for Snape growing a heart! Very good! And Harry is finally believing he has someone to talk to. Yay! Maybe Sev will talk about his past too? I'll have to read on later. Again, very good!!
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Hehe, I enjoy your reviews, they make me smile. Harry believes he has someone to talk to, but it's still a bit hard for them both at this point. Snape is unlikely to talk about his past this early on, but I'm certain that he will at some point. Thanks. -Mel :)
Yes, the dungeon bat has a heart!! ^-^ You're story is just really cute! Who couldn't love a happy Harry and a nervous Sev that's trying to be nice? lol Very good! I'm off to the next chappie...
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Of course he does, it's just buried somewhere inside him. Thanks! Haha, yeah true. :P. -Mel :)
Cute! Snape wanting to play mama and whipe Harry's cheek! XD Too cute. But poor Harry having nightmares. That's not good. Maybe Snape can help him with that? *hopeful eyes* Guess I'll go see. Nice chapter! ^-^
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Hehe, he was tempted to. Snape doesn't know about the nightmares yet, so unfortunatly Harry must suffer them without his help for now. Thanks. -Mel :)
HA! Snape wants essays to grade and be mean to relieve stress! XD That's funny! And it's so cute that Snape doesn't want Harry to think he's 'over' thinking anything. Too cute Sev! And Now Harry's happy. Yay happy Harry! Very good again! I'm off to the next!
Author's Response: Ivy-green, When Snape is stressed...the essays suffer the consenquences lol. Heh, thanks for sharing your comments :P. Yeah, thanks. -Mel :)
I've decided that I want an Anchald. He's kinda mean, but I think I'd like to have him in my room or office. I think he'd be fun to talk to because even though he says he doesn't want to listen to you, he's really lonely and wants someone...*gasp* kinda like Snape! ^-^ I liked this a lot. Good job!! I'm gunna keep going on...
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Actually I do agree with you, he would be rather useful. Even as a grouch, he still seems to talk sense and he too is rather lonely. Hahaha! Yeah, kinda like Snape! Pleased to hear it and thanks. -Mel :)
Oh, come on Sev! Be a nice guy for once!lol Again, very good. Dumbles seems to be a bit more stern in this than others that I have read, but I like it!:D I'm going on to the next chap!
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Hehe, nice guy? I believe that many would fear of losing their minds if Snape suddenly became nice :P. Dumbledore, I believe, can be rather stern when need be. Glad you like it though. -Mel :)
Oh my! Rock on Harry! I so glad he asked, and thinking about Snape sitting there unable to say anything is funny! XD Poor guy, but yay Harry! Way uber cute! There were several lines in this that just made me smile! Again, good work! I enjoyed this and I can't wait to see what Snape'll day...so I won't! Off I go to the next chappie! ;D
Author's Response: Ivy-green, I can imagine that a speechless Snape would be quite a hilarious sight indeed! Glad it made you smile and thanks! Hehe. -Mel :)
Aww! Poor Harry! But I agree, I think Snape would be the perfect choice, especially if he could get Severus to like him. No one messes with Snape or anything he loves and gets away with it! This is very interesting! Very good job! But if I could say, in a few places you have 'now' in for 'how'. It's nothing too major, and I make mistakes ALL the time, but I thought you might like to know! ^-^ Now I'm off to the next chappie! :P
Author's Response: Ivy-Green, Yeah and I'm glad you agree. Haha, true! I will try to fix the now/how errors asap, thanks for telling me because I do like to be told these things on occasion. -Mel :)
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| 27 Sep 2009 8:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Allywhatsits (Anonymous)
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Please run spell-check before posting, or proof-read your chapters better.
Author's Response: Allywhatsits, There is no spell-check...is there? I do proof-read my chapters, but is it really that bad? I only noticed a few errors after further inspection...thanks for letting me know though. -Mel :)
| Title: Why not?
| 27 Sep 2009 7:37 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter can't wait for more could you please not bold the writing I have really bad eyesight no joke it's terrible
Author's Response: S.S, Thanks, glad to hear it! I'm sorry about the bold but I actually didn't do that. It happens sometimes when I update and trust me, I hate it too!! I will fix it asap. Thanks. -Mel :)
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