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Reviews For Just a father
Author's Response: Dramagirl007, It's not supposed to be in bold. That happens when I update sometimes; really annoying. Dumbledore's reasons for closing the school is indeed mysterious and it will remain that way for now. Thank-you and I will. Updates are usually every few days, asap. -Mel :)
Author's Response: S.S, Thanks, I'm glad to hear that. Yeah, I quite enjoyed the Christmas part of this story. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Poirot, Thank-you. Interesting, yes I will certainly keep those requested activities in mind. Although they will get to know each other more at some point, hopefully soon. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Monica, Thanks, glasd you think so! -Mel :)
Nice chapter! Author's Response: Mithrilandtj, Perhaps that's what he's afriad of lol. Thank-you! -Mel :)
Loved the fatherly taking him to the hospital wing bit. Again, he's trying...They're both kind of trying...They'll learn...I'm sure they will. Author's Response: Raven knight, I wasn't so sure if I should keep that part or not and I got stuck with how to proceed at one point, but overall I liked it and I'm glad it wasn't a mistake to keep it in there. Snape is doing most of the trying at the moment but in a way yes, they're both putting in effort. They will learn, and some major lessons are coming up! Thanks. -Mel :)
Hmm...The digging into Snape's thoughts was very well done. How he pictured what it would have been like if Harry were his son, and what he assumed Harry wanted from this arrangement and what he wanted, until concluding that they simply both wanted a family. It was a lovely train of thought. I felt bad for Harry on the Astronomy Tower wondering if he had godparents, and how he figured out that he wanted everything about the father/son relationship. *giggles* McGonagall's thoughts were funny, actually. She's trying to figure it out. *snort* She's confused...and flabbergasted. Aww, Snape is trying. I got excited when he said, "Harry," for the first time too. You'll get there, boys. You will. (ALthough the comment about Sirius aiming the bludger at the Slytherin Seeker...hilarious!) Author's Response: Raven knight, I adore your reviews! They make me happy, motivated and inspired. Plus they're quite helpful too. I am unsure how to respond to all of your comments etc without taking up a whole page, but thanks heaps and I loved them all. You're right too. I loved the comment about Sirius as well, it seemed to fit perfectly in my mind :P, him doing that. Poor McGonagall indeed. Oh and they're going to get there soon enough, although the accidental useage of Harry's first name will lead to more, hope you like! Will update soon, thanks so much! -Mel :)
-P.G. Author's Response: P.G, Indeed he does! Yeah, he will...perhaps sooner rather than later. I'm pleased to hear that!! Thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Crystal cove, Thanks, glad to hear it. Will update asap. -Mel :)
I hope Snape figures out how to express himself. Harry is clearly starved for attention and needs a bit of coddling in his life. At the end I was hoping Sev would call Harry back and give him a hug or some form of physical contact, but hopefully next chapter. You're doing a great job developing their relationship. Not too fast, but not drawn out either. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ~Ella Author's Response: Ella, Thanks for the review!! Was the entire chapter a bit rushed or just some parts in particular? Snape is trying to figure numerous things out, poor man but he will get the hang of some things soon for he is starting to see just how much Harry does need it. Physical contact is still in the "avoid at all costs" zone for Snape at the moment, so hugging is out of the question unless he's in a comfortable enough situation or sees that Harry really needs it, hang tight...won't be too long for some proper contact. Thank-you for all your comments! Glad to hear it, will update soon. -Mel :) |
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