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Reviews For Just a father
Title: Giving attempts 14 Sep 2009 7:23 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response:

    S.S,

    Thanks, I'm pleased to hear it. Will update asap.

    -Mel :)

Title: Giving attempts 14 Sep 2009 3:39 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wonderful chapter

    Author's Response:

    Monica,

    Thanks, I'm glad you think so.

    -Mel :)

Title: Giving attempts 14 Sep 2009 3:26 pm
Reviewer: Astrid (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Love it!
    I do like the pace of it. It is not too fast where Snape suddenly behaves like 'The Father of the Year' and does everything correctly and well. Snape is making an effort to fulfill the role and every small changes will get him one step closer to what Harry envisioned a father would be like.
    Looking forward for the next one...and hoping to see more of Snape trying to become a 'real' father.

    Author's Response:

    Astrid,

    Glad you think so :P. Yeah, I tried to give it a much more realistic sense. True, he is and they are getting closer bit by bit. Snape is constantly trying and Harry is going to start putting in more efforts too once he realises that Snape is serious about his acceptance. Thanks for your review!!

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 13 Sep 2009 5:16 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    "I'm going to go to bed and die!" *laughs* Poor Harry! *keeps laughing* They're getting a little better. If Harry fell asleep the first study session or so I think Snape would have taken points on the spot! Love the ink on his face too. That was cute and funny. Leave it to Snape to not want to flat out say, "Mr. Potter, wipe the ink from your face," but opt to let a tired Harry figure out body language. Poor boy.

    Author's Response:

    Raven knight,

    Lol! Your review made me laugh, thanks! Yeah, poor Harry indeed. I do think he would have taken points, perhaps a detention to go with that? :P. Now that you mention it...that's hilarious, for I hadn't thought of it quite that way; "let a tired Harry figure out body language". Hahaha! Thanks, your review was great and it made me laugh! But you're right, of course and I enjoy your thoughts, so again, thank-you for your review! :D.

    -Mel :)

Title: The beginning 13 Sep 2009 5:08 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, Snape's trying. I like this story a lot! It's humorous, cute, and all the characters are still themselves, so...nicely done, you!

    Author's Response:

    Raven knight,

    Yeah, he is trying lol. I'm happy to hear it. Your comments made me smile :). You say that the characters are still themselves? I'm thrilled! Characterisation is something I try my best at and seems to be most important to be, so thanks a lot!! Thank-you for your reivew!

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 13 Sep 2009 2:41 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't wait for more

    Author's Response:

    Monica,

    Glad to hear it...should update soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 13 Sep 2009 4:21 am
Reviewer: shigeki11 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow.
    this is so awkward. haha. there's a part of my brain that's saying, "no way is this possible!", but another part liking it all the same. =)

    Author's Response:

    Shigeki11,

    Really? Thanks. Hehe, is it? No way is what possible? Certain parts or the wntire general idea? :P It is "AU" afterall. But I'm pleased to hear that you're liking it!

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 13 Sep 2009 3:24 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter xxx

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Thank-you!

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 13 Sep 2009 2:42 am
Reviewer: Crystal Cove (Signed) [Report This]
    I looooovveeedddd it :) I saw maybe one typo throughout the chapter, but that happens to the best of us. Hurry to update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Crystal cove,

    Thrilled to hear it! Yeah, I try to fix any errors but some still slip through. Thanks and I will, haha. Soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 13 Sep 2009 1:28 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    One step at a time...
    Going well!

    Author's Response:

    Cckeimig,

    Yeah. Thanks!

    -Mel :)


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