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Title: The beginning 12 Sep 2009 10:57 am
Reviewer: johnny101 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    " perhaps some student assignments to take his stress out on."

    I know that one of my teachers is doing the same thing!! heehehe

    Author's Response:

    Johnn101,

    Hehe and hopefully not to your work! :P

    -Mel :)

Title: The beginning 11 Sep 2009 5:27 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww yay. It's definitely a start. I like that Snape is going to help Harry with his homework. Harry seems like he really needs it.

    I'm looking forward to how the "tutoring" sessions go. It could either be a disaster or help jump start their relationship. Good job.

    Author's Response:

    EllaEleniel,

    Yeah, glad you liked it. Haha, yeah Harry does really need it at this point. And I'm happy to hear those comments although it may be both rather than either. Thanks.

    -Mel :)

Title: The beginning 11 Sep 2009 12:32 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought I reviewed this story at one time. Oh well, This is very good and I can't wait until you continue. :)

    Author's Response:

    Dramagirl1007,

    Nonetheless, thanks and I'm glad to hear it.

    -Mel :)

Title: The beginning 10 Sep 2009 11:12 pm
Reviewer: DoC Brown (Signed) [Report This]
    ...You might want to know that the dialogue between AD and SS could do with slightly less input from Captain Obvious >_>;; Your readers are sufficiently smart, methinks.

    Author's Response:

    DoC brown,

    Which parts were you refering to or did you mean the entire conversation from the last chapter? It would be easier to fix or be aware of it you could inform me just which parts you mean. Thanks for the comment though; I do not take my readers to be idiots though, just so you know ;).

    -Mel :)

Title: The beginning 10 Sep 2009 10:53 pm
Reviewer: Crystal Cove (Signed) [Report This]
    Updaaaaate! :)

    Author's Response:

    Crystal cove,

    Lol. I will be, very soon...promise!

    -Mel :)

Title: The beginning 10 Sep 2009 7:59 pm
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it!

    Author's Response:

    Anon,

    Glad to hear it!

    -Mel :)

Title: The beginning 10 Sep 2009 7:24 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, They are finally getting somewhere. Great chappie, I can't wait for more.

    Poor Snape, he really didn't know what he was getting into!

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Indeed they are and more coming. Thanks, glad to hear it. And yes, poor Snape indeed...I think he had some idea of what he was getting into but didn't consider the finer details. Like not reading the fine print on a contract before signing. :P

    -Mel :)

Title: The beginning 10 Sep 2009 6:53 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter you can see the relationship between them geting stronger and like you said they have a long way to go

    Author's Response:

    S.S,

    Thanks and indeed, that was the intent. Yeah. Thanks.

    -Mel :)

Title: The beginning 10 Sep 2009 6:46 pm
Reviewer: Black Banshee Girl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This really is a great story and I can't wait to read more. I've got your story under favorites so I'll be able to see more when you update. Thanks again for sharing.

    Author's Response:

    Black Banshee girl,

    Thank-you for your comments and I'm glad you think so. Yay, it's in favourites :P. You're welcome, thanks for your thoughts!

    -Mel :)

Title: The beginning 10 Sep 2009 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Wyrsa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "I do not gossip" - liked this line.
    For now it all seems like Snape is tying to do his job professionally. Guess, with time it may become more...
    Yay for new chapter, you do great! Thank you for updating so soon.)

    Author's Response:

    Wyrsa,

    Ha, yeah. I thought it would be in-character for him to clarify that :P. He is taking a more professional approach to the situation, but mostly because he is unsure how else to approach it. True, with time it'll be become more but they're trying to establish trust and knowledge here so...not quite yet.

    Thanks and you're welcome.

    -Mel :)


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