Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Just a father
Title: Reactive 07 Sep 2009 9:05 am
Reviewer: Astrid (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love your story and thanks for the really fast update!
    Will be waiting for the next chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Astrid,

    I'm happy to hear that and you're welcome! I know personally how annoying it is to wait so long for updates and since I get enough reviews in a short time than I have no problem with updating fast. Thanks.

    -Mel :)

Title: Questions for answers 07 Sep 2009 8:09 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please post soon! Please let snape be understanding about this! I love the way Harry Ron and Hermiione came together to help harry get better in potions and soften him up. Love the story.

    Author's Response:

    Missyny1,

    Updating asap. Snape will be udnerstanding at comes point but right now he's just too shocked to even know how to react. Ron and Hermione are his best friends, they're there for him and showing him support...he's gonna need it. Thanks, I'm glad to hear that.

    Thanks for your review!

    -Mel :)

Title: Questions for answers 07 Sep 2009 6:39 am
Reviewer: reven (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aaah, no!, what a place to end the chapter. I cannot wait for the next one and Snape's reaction.

    I do like how the story's going so far with Harry asking Snape to be his father. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes

    Author's Response:

    Reven,

    I had to end it there. Snape's reaction hehehe, yeah I like the first scene of next chapter, will update soon!

    Thanks for the comments, for reviewing etc. I hope to keep it realistic in some form as well.

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 07 Sep 2009 3:35 am
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very interesting way to have Harry realize that he needs a parental figure...and then his reasoning and narrowing it down to the right candidate. Should be interesting when he actually asks Snape. Original idea. Like it so far!

    Author's Response:

    Raven Knight,

    Thank-you! Harry has been doing a lot of thinking indeed. Poor Snape, lol. First one Potter wants to torment him than the other wants him to raise him. When he's finally asked...hehe.

    Glad it's original, :P

    -Mel :)

Title: Questions for answers 07 Sep 2009 3:00 am
Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I love the build up here, but I hate the cliffhanger! Evil author.

    There are two ways Snape could take this. He could believe that Harry is playing a prank and blow up at him. On the other hand, he could be utterly shocked, and then figure out a way to turn it to his advantage. Him? In control of the Potter boy? Happy days. Either way, I can't wait to see what you decide to do. I hope you update soon! ;)

    Author's Response:

    Emma,

    I am one to use cliffhangers when possible, but this was one rather unintentionally. Yes, I am evil though :P. At least you liked the build up!

    True, those are the two main options that Snape has, but he's a man of talent and could go for both...or neither. Heh. Although I doubt he'll believe that anyone could ever control a Potter. Thanks for your review, and I promise to update very soon...most likely today.

    -Mel :)

Title: Questions for answers 07 Sep 2009 2:25 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    ... snape is going to rip him to pieces.

    Author's Response:

    Writeurlife,

    Hahahaha, I can't help but agree. What did Harry expect "that sounds wonderful, sure", eh? Will update soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Questions for answers 07 Sep 2009 1:33 am
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    definite chuckle material

    Author's Response:

    Petuniac3,

    I agree, lol. I can just picture the look on Snape's face!

    -Mel :)

Title: Questions for answers 07 Sep 2009 1:25 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG I can't believe you left it THERE!
    ACK!

    Author's Response:

    Mithrilandtj,

    Sorry! But it was mildly unavoidable. Will update asap!

    -Mel :)

Title: Questions for answers 07 Sep 2009 1:12 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG, you need to update now! That's a terrible cliffie! I'm really enjoying this story and how Harry's friends think he's crazy and I'm not entirely sure that Harry knows why he wants Snape as his father either, but it's interesting to watch him go after something this big. I can't imagine Snape saying yes this soon in the game though, so I hope poor Harry has braced himself for disappointment. :(

    Please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    P.G,

    I will asap! Haha. Harry is trying to rationalise and put words to why he wants Snape as his father, but deep down and in all honestly, he doesn't actually have a clue. He is going after it and won't be letting go of it in a hurry.

    No, if Snape said yes right now than something is surely wrong with the man. Harry has braced himself somewhat but does that mean he won't be saddened? This is personal for him and he has his heart/mind set on it so strongly; he will be affected. But then again, Severus is sure to not come out unaffected as well.

    Thanks for the review,

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 07 Sep 2009 12:47 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting and original plotline. I'm excited to see where this goes.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    P.G,

    Glad to hear it, thanks! :D

    -Mel :)


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