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Reviews For Serendipity
I especially enjoy the interactions between Harry and Severus. The way they accept and care for each other warms my heart. I applaud Harry for the way he handles baby Severus. I usually steer away from Harry and Ginny pairing, however, the way you potray their relationship changes my mind. It seems so real you see. Maybe it is the level of maturity in their relationship. It is not overly childish, considering their young age. Well, I guess it is because of the war. I understand that war can change people. I am glad that you are sharing this story with us and I thank you for that! Looking forward for the continuation and how the story will unfold. I am very curious about Harry's health and I hope the guardianship will turn out alright. Again thank you! Have a pleasant day. (Please pardon my bad grammar and spelling, I am not a native speaker of English.)
I can't describe it any better, but I think you should have made them older or characterise them more true to their age. Author's Response: I respect your opinion. However, as an anthropologist, my argument would be this: What defines the behavior of a "regular" teenager? What defines "regular" to begin with? One must take into account what culture said person was raised in, the kind of family they were raised with, what values they were raised with, the circumstances surrounding one's life, one's thought patterns, one's coping mechanisms, one's system of beliefs. The list can be quite endless, actually. Acting "true to one's age" is quite relative. The discrepancies can be astounding, even if one observes two teenagers of the same age, class, ethnicity, religion, and educational background in the same school! How one acts depends on a multitude of things. It doesn't matter how old one is. Personally, when I was 16/17 this is EXACTLY how I acted and thought. And I hadn't even gone through the traumatic events that Harry and Ginny had just gone through in the course of their young lives. If you would like a justification, then I would say that this is how they coped with the stress of their daily lives. They, like many young people who have had to live through a terrifying, devastating war, have chosen to protect themselves by "growing up" (as some societies in the modern-day western world choose to put it). Their priorities are entirely different than a "regular" (read, "stereotypical") muggle British teenager's priorities. Have that, if you will. Personally, as an author, as an anthropologist, and as a former/current misunderstood American teenager, I have NO definition of "normal" or "regular" or acting "true to one's age". I believe that the "general opinion" that society has of teenagers today merely consists of prejudices and stereotypes. *Shrugs* :) But truth is relative, in my opinion. Given that, I COMPLETELY respect your opinion, though. This is just how I consciously chose to write my characters. Thank you for the review! :)
Harry needs an artificial leg, huh.
I loved Sev's battle with temptation... that was great! And I also love anytime Sev and Teddy get together... what a hoot! The 'drop the ring' game - with Harry blindly picking it up over and over was priceless - I have never known a baby yet who didn't love that game! But this one was even more brilliant: because Sev was making Teddy laugh with it. Brilliant. WOW - can't wait for the next chapter... you ARE going to let us know what the antidote is for soon -aren't you!!?? Please!
Congratulations! Great chapter. V. |
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