I really liked this story. The end surprised me! Great job! I just knew that Harry was going to end up with the other girl and not Ginny. I'm glad it was Ginny! My only complaint is that it wasn't longer! Lol great job!
story was very good, also a good ending.
| Title: Facade
| 21 Sep 2013 1:50 am
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| Reviewer: ailishmckechnie (Anonymous)
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Very well written and I loved the plot twist at the end. Love the added regressed aging of Harry too. Was hoping for a sequel, tear-tear. Well done!
A very entertaining read, which does lend itself to a sequel. I like how you summarized how things would have ended had you carried the story onto culmination, rather than leaving it up in the air.
Hags! What a wonderful idea.
Hags! What a wonderful idea.
Fun :) Typical of Snape to immediatelly blame Harry.
| Title: Facade
| 19 Jun 2011 4:54 am
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| Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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haha, good twist, i didn't see that coming!
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