| Title: The Princess
| 20 Aug 2010 11:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Ichigo Mirai (Anonymous)
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this is really good!! wonder what'll happen next...
THIS IS A PRETTY AWESOME STORY.
Although it looks like you've abandoned it? Alas.
My only criticism is that eight-year-old Harry wasn't nearly as adorable as he could've been. Oh well.
Also, how much does Older Harry remember? Hmm. Perhaps we'll find out...In The Next Chapter.
Hey, I really like this story, are you ever going to finish it?
| Title: Shopkeeper
| 28 Apr 2010 3:29 am
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| Reviewer: Princess613 (Anonymous)
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I really like this story. I personally don't think the Drusleys abused Harry, but you did the scene well.
Author's Response: In the real books I don't think they did either, but in fan-fiction the story becomes whatever you write it to be, so in this one Harry did get abused unfortunately. That is also the case in most of the stories on P & S... it makes for a more angsty story.
I enjoyed this story and can't wait to find out if Snape will continue to treat Potter nicely or what will transpire. Kind of wish that the deaging potion hadn't worn off so quickly. Anywho can't wait for more wonderful job.
this is really good!! please update whenever you can... can't wait to read what happens next in this!
| Title: Shopkeeper
| 11 Dec 2009 2:15 am
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| Reviewer: helga1967 (Anonymous)
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Please, Please, please ... continue. The tale is very good and I love to see more of this original fic.
| Title: Shopkeeper
| 21 Nov 2009 3:12 am
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| Reviewer: helga1967 (Anonymous)
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Excellent! I loved so far. Please, continue.
| Title: Shopkeeper
| 03 Nov 2009 8:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Angela (Anonymous)
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A very nice start. I would very much like to see Harry and Snape truely begin to trust each other.
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