Oh, no! Poor little Harry! Oh, I hope you update soon!
Poor Harry. Snape needs to get his act together.
| Title: Losing Sleep
| 15 Dec 2009 6:37 am
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| Reviewer: Min (Anonymous)
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Heartbreakingly sad! Come on, Snape!
I'm sad that Snapey didn't respond *pouts*... but happy that you updated. Very good chapter, albeit depressing.
Here...have some chocolates. Yummy. Just like this story.
I really hope that Snape can tell Harry how he DOES care for him eventually.
I can't wait for more. Well done.
This is a beautiful story, and a beautiful chapter. I feel so sorry for Harry, feeling so alone and frightened and unwanted. The poor kid...all he's ever wanted is his own family who wants him.
I felt so bad when Severus couldn't respond properly at the end, but I do understand that it's a big change for him too. I hope that his feelings will change soon though, and that he will come to see how special and wonderful Harry is , and to love and want him. And even more, to make that plain to Harry.
Looking forward to more!
| Title: Losing Sleep
| 15 Dec 2009 3:42 am
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| Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous)
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This chap was awesome!!!Please please please update again Soon! Anyway great work:)!! Nyx
Oh, that was a cool twist. I wonder who the attacker is... Quirrel? That would make some sense, although it seems like he would kill him rather than beat him up. Malfoy wouldn't have enough skills- and where would he get a cloak?
Anyway, I hope that Snape does something useful for Harry. He hasn't done much up until now to reinvent Harry's idea of normal.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Snape knows it's a slow process and 'new normal' won't happen over night, especially with Harry's trust issues.
What an amazing story. I'm really liking the way it is taking so long to convince Harry that he isn't a bad person and that he is deserving of good things/people in his life. There's been nearly a decade of his own family telling him otherwise, so why should he accept the contradictory words of strangers?
Good job on the invisible attacker and the blood adoption. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
| Title: A Plan
| 13 Dec 2009 4:08 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter can't wait for more
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