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Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 16 Nov 2009 9:16 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Heh heh - great beginning. Could totally see it happening! I love Snape's attitude all the way through - and especially the way little Harry managed to wind him around his little finger in the end! So cute! Will there be a sequel?

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I am so happy you liked it! I did enjoy writing it so much. I wasn't thinking of a sequel at all but everyone's been so nice that I think I owe it to them! So yes, I will do a sequel. It will be around Christmas though because the rest of this term is going to be pretty hectic. Thanks again!
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 16 Nov 2009 8:14 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant story.... Snape is really a softy underneath the bat like apperance haha

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, it means such a lot to me! I'm so glad you liked it. *giggles* yes, Snape is a total marshmellow when you remove the wings!
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 16 Nov 2009 7:18 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so sweet!! Hee hee, Dumbledore is so manipulative. Severus just got taken in....big time!!!

    This was a wonderful story, that left me wanting more!! Great job Angel. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! *giggles* I can just imagine Dumbledore telling Snape that the fixture is actually permenant!  I am so glad you enjoyed it, it really means a lot to me. As I was saying to OE, I didn't even know the stories were beginning to be put up yet and so it was a lovely surprise. Now, I just can't wait to read everyone else's!!! Thanks so much!
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 16 Nov 2009 4:57 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, god, this is so sweet! The guiltily pleasurable giggles are attacking me. (Does that make sense?) He he. Very nice. I just don't know why the story's put up in "angst", because, I swear, it's the funniest Snape I've seen in a long time. :) "It is typical Potter arrogance that you would even believe yourself to be a valuable ingredient!” - That won me over completely!

    Loved how Harry opened up by the end; though, considering, he didn't speak to Snape for most of the day, I was rather surprised when he asked the Professor to be read a bedtime story. Not complaining, though. :)

    Adorable little story! Well done!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad you liked it! I love writing little Harry, I often struggle with small childrens' speech though but that didn't matter very much in this story as I made sure little Harry didn't give me any difficulty and he kept very quiet for me, lol. It is funny seeing Snape cope with the sweet things in life, I think a rose and some dog poo fall under the same category in Snape's book!

     Yes, it was rather a quick turn around for Harry to cuddle him at the end but I decided that no one can look scary when they are sleep (not that I sit around and watch people, you understand *giggles*) and little Harry had had such a scary day that all he wanted was a cuddle and with his motheaten old bear back at the Dursleys Snape was just the second best thing! Harry is impulsive, I think, and so I think he climbed onto his knee impulsively. Besides, he's only little and the need for a cuddle outweighed the feared consequences for the time being, I'm getting a bit scientific now, and I'm just making it up so I'll be quiet now. LOL! Harry's cuddle was a surprise considering Snape scared him but I guess he wasn't as scary after he heroically defeated the scary (and non-existant) boggart and read countless bedtime stories.

    Thanks so much for the review!!!

Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 16 Nov 2009 4:43 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Adorable! I can't wait to read more. And the first sentence was perfect. I loved it. It definatly set the mood for the whole story.

    Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! I'm so glad you liked the first sentence. I tend to write them last because the first sentence is always hard to get over and I find if I start in the middle and then work down and then go back to the top then I've got into the swing of it and I don't have to sit staring at a blank document waiting for the first sentence to fall out of the sky, which it never does anyway. That was such a complex sentence, it's because I'm so excited about the fest. I can't type fast enough! I'm quite breathless *breathes in, out, in, out* there, that's a bit better. Anyway, thank you so much!
Title: The Biggest Mistake of Them All? 16 Nov 2009 4:36 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hahaha That last line made me smirk. I especially liked the part where Severus pretends to hold up something wiggly. :oP And yes, Severus, you are good with children. *pats Severus* Great job, angel! And I liked how you used the quote, "Bravery is overrated". Thanks for sharing.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I was all confused earlier when I checked my email and suddenly had so many reviews when I hadn't updated anything and then I saw what they were for and I was like "the fest has started!" And then I was really excited! Especially as I was first, I wasn't expecting that at all and it's so great! (Thanks so much!) I didn't know the fics were starting to be posted from now and so it was a lovely surprise! I'm so glad you liked it! I was going to have an actual boggart under the bed but then I beta-ered Leilia Snape's and I didn't want mine to be too similiar to hers (especially as hers was so good! otherwise mine would just be a worse version of hers) so I changed it slightly and when I'd done it I thought it fitted in better with my Snape anyway. Gosh, I do blabber. The basics of this reply; thanks so much for the lovely review, thanks so much for creating such a great fest for me to take part in, thanks so much for starting with my story and thanks so much everything you do for P&S! Oh, and I'm so glad you liked it; that was a pretty key part of the reply as well!

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