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Reviews For Sinking Feeling
Title: Sinking Feeling 19 Nov 2009 3:14 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, that was so good!!!! I loved it.

    And the best part was that that toad got totally toasted! I loved how Snape took care of Harry too. Very sweet.

    Aw, I want more of this! Sequel maybe?

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you found it fun :D Sequel... maybe if I can corral those plot bunnies a little better, but at the moment it's like herding cats! Thanks for you review!
Title: Sinking Feeling 19 Nov 2009 12:48 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this was so descriptive! I could really picture it all, it was written so well. You have so many lovely, original ideas in here as well. You want to know ways to improve it? There's only one thing I can think of...*chants* sequel, sequel, sequel!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed so much! Hmm, well I have a couple of ideas floating around, but I'm afraid it might be a while before I can sort them into making any sort of sense (darn real life...:D) Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Sinking Feeling 18 Nov 2009 11:42 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha! I loved this sentence: "I am going to find a way to get rid of that puffed up, pompous toad once and for all!” I wish someone said that in canon books! I still cannot believe Dumble left her have her way (wicked way!)
    This story was fun to read, and it had several changes that I had not anticipated. Plus the end was optimistic and maybe there will be a sequel about summer with Snape (because where else would DUmble send Harry, eh?). Good work! Mila

    Author's Response: Heh heh - the joys of alliteration and assonance - I agree, if only it could have happened! I'm glad you enjoyed! Maybe there will be a sequel, but I don't have too many ides at the moment I'm afraid... fingers crossed though! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Sinking Feeling 18 Nov 2009 11:26 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so funny!!!! I so enjoyed it. That's the way Umbrigde should have been taken out! Way to go!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I agree - SOMETHING more permanent should have happened to Umbridge in canon than being carried off by centaurs (though that was fun at the time too...)
Title: Sinking Feeling 18 Nov 2009 10:15 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    hi! This was great fun to read. :D You've dropped a few words at points - so for example, Snape is now holding up the forest floor rather than Harry. ;) Was the 'tolerable' a ref to P&P? The characters were great and I especially loved the popcorn scene!

    Author's Response: Thank you for spotting that! I've gone back over and fixed it (I'm afraid to admit that I did end up rushing a bit as the deadline drew closer, so I really appreciate your help) I'm not sure I understand your P&P reference, but please feel free to take your pick of; maybe, possibly, probably! I generally prefer interpreting things in your own way (even if it wasn't what I originally intended) so it could possibly give an extra twist to the story... Hmm, rambling, will now purposefully put an end to the obsessive typing now and simply say: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Sinking Feeling 18 Nov 2009 9:19 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed your story! Great job, and I loved how Snape and Harry outwitted Umbridge.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it - it was fun to write!
Title: Sinking Feeling 18 Nov 2009 6:26 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm loving the Fest stories! They keep surprising me. Based on your prompts I expected a 'DE's catch Harry story enter Snape', but I was surprised!

    It's very well written, and overall entertaining. I loved the kitten doodles, ^_^ You could seriously make another story with that alone, :P

    I could see all of Hogwarts watching Harry and Snape bicker while eating snacks, heh.

    I really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing!
    ~ S

    Author's Response: My mind definitely works in peculiar ways... I am glad you enjoyed the craziness all the same! Hmm, maybe if I got enough plot ideas together, I could work the doodles into a sequel... heh, oh dear. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Sinking Feeling 18 Nov 2009 5:44 pm
Reviewer: BuckeyeBelle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A sequel would improve it! This was hilarious.

    Author's Response: Ah, maybe one day I'll be able to fulfil that! Unfortunately I only have a couple of stray thoughts rather than something that could turn into a plot at the moment, but I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Sinking Feeling 18 Nov 2009 5:08 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ha! That was great! What a fun read. I especially liked the part where Umbrige peeked out from behind the parchment and said, "That's me." That was great imagery. LOL! And I loved that Snape was so matter of fact while rescuing Harry and still managed to insult him. Oh and I liked Harry plucking Hermes from the sky. You really had some wonderful descriptions throughout which made the story come alive. Thanks for a great story!

    Author's Response: Heh, thank you! I couldn't resist that bit - it just popper into my head and wouldn't leave me alone - same with the Hermes bit actually! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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