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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
harry baby you are doing such a good job you know it makes me really happy to hear about the unseelie court's relationship with the elves it's hard to think logically and respectfully about a people you are seemingly biologically programmed to mistrust and dislike (the instant dislike seems like a LOT more than just clashes of culture) even so, the court recognizes the elves are Good People, worthy of respect, and excellent allies (they were elves, and that is Good People -Tolkein) i'm really so impressed by harry he is only fifteen and he's doing a spectacular job
fascinating i'm glad harry is giving himself more time it would be bad for him to land in the middle of lots of unseelie only for him to be very obviously COMPLETELY ignorant they'd exploit the hell out of him or at the very least, he'd be likely to mortally offend plenty of people and make all sorts of insinuations or idk marriage proposals by accident too bad lliannan didn't think of a baby book harry you're supposed to dry her before a new diaper goes on and diaper powder can help too but mostly she needs to be dry i'd say her head needs to always be supported but i'm assuming harry is smart enough that if when he stood her on his lap briefly her head had rolled way back he'd catch it and go okay head needs to be supported i'd definitely buy even newborn unseelie sidhe being hardier than human babies hm maybe not a baby book bc they're not going to write that down probably or at least not for publication then a bundle of notes spelled to be only readable by harry written by lliannan would be good though i definitely appreciate that there are benefits to going in blind, i think not-blind with an open mind would be most helpful + transferable skills like diapers too bad none of the people he hung out with knew enough to/offered to help him with basic baby care knowledge they probably had their reasons man oh man what a mess
he's the WHAT??????? you know what's too bad is the mother didn't have the forethought to WRITE DOWN Moriyana-Lliannanre-Ardbeijahn-She (I copied it from above just to make sure i didn't do it wrong) because as soon as she's dead the best harry can do is Moryana- Lliannanre-something-or-other and it would be honestly tragic for her to not know her own name though sort of apropos i suppose for her name to be changed slightly by harry WAIT PENSIEVES EXIST whenever harry gets hold of one (and it would probably be a good idea so other nobles could see what she said? or so harry can review the information she gave him) he can view the memory and write down her damn name and why least he got her middle name right i wonder if -she is just a different phonetic spelling of -sidhe? I guess harry must have come across a fantasy story once that mentioned fae or i don't think he would have heard what sounds like "she" and known it's spelled "sidhe" anyway ahem he's the WHAT??!!?!?!!?!?!??
so far this has been fascinating you know it makes me think of the times when shitty parents suddenly realize that ALL of their child is a freak and kicks them out of the house i'm talking about forcibly homeless lgbt kids i hope the goblins let him get money when he goes to gringotts he's gonna need it
You have a wonderful writing style.
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