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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
Title: Liar 28 Jul 2010 8:22 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    “Yeah, but what fun would that be?” he finally said. “I'm the school's new delinquent. This is what I do.”

    Sprout frowned. “You're not a delinquent. That's what is so frustrating.”

    My favorite lines!!! Harry has set a record that even the twins did do. Malfroy an elf, interesting.

    Thank you for your update. Well written chapter. I look forward to your next update.

    Author's Response: Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review!! And you're very welcome!!
Title: Liar 28 Jul 2010 3:37 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved it! Poor Tobias! He really is falling back into what Harry does. He's bringing a lot of attention to himself too. Won't all the students talk about him, won't his existence at the school get sent along to the King and Queen? Very, very interesting story. I love it! Thanks so much for writing and sharing it!

    I did notice one typo in the beginning. “No,” Tobias said confusedly, “no, that's fine. It's a little strange, but if the Headmaster wants it than it's not a problem to me.” than should be then.

    I went and edited the formatting of the last couple of chapters so that they would have paragraph indentations.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, and the edit. I'll go fix it. Also thanks for fixing the formatting. That's really helpful. Glad you like!! Thanks again!
Title: Liar 28 Jul 2010 1:26 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter; I loved Harry's discussion with Professor Sprout- you've portrayed her beautifully.

    Author's Response: :0) Thanks!! I'm really glad you like it!! Yeah, I like Sprout, too. I was surprised, because I didn't like her much in Canon, but then when I had to turn her into a more complex character to actually write her, I ended up liking her quite a bit. Dunno why. :0) Thanks for the review!
Title: Liar 27 Jul 2010 11:29 pm
Reviewer: Acop (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love your story and all your ideas about the people !!!! But I must admit I really can't wait to see more interactions between Harry and Snape, we havn't seen nearly enough of snape for now :)
    Keep the good work gong !!!

    Author's Response: Lol don't worry. Snape will be more involved soon. Thanks for the review! Glad you like!
Title: Liar 27 Jul 2010 8:28 pm
Reviewer: Louise (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey! Just wanna say I think you're really good.. This is my best favourite-ever between all the ffs I've read. I can't wait for the next chapter, post soon pleeeeease!

    Author's Response: Yey!! So glad you like so much!!! Thanks for the review!
Title: Liar 27 Jul 2010 8:24 pm
Reviewer: Anonymus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I LOVE this story! It's great! I think it's original and you're also really good at writing, well done =D

    Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm so glad you like it!!
Title: Liar 27 Jul 2010 11:31 am
Reviewer: Bethany (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I absolutely love this story!!! I will sit on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter.

    Author's Response: :0) Glad you like!!
Title: Liar 27 Jul 2010 6:55 am
Reviewer: jlar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yay! another chapter and i almost missed it! it has yet to pop up on my recent pg i admit i saw it on the other site and then came here to investigate.
    I'm really liking that Harry/Tobias is thinking a bit better than he did in canon and I cringe to think how his detention with umbridge will go... and i do like the Puff angle.

    Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the 'heads up'! The fic never did show up on the recent page. I emailed Obsidianembrace and she fixed it for me. And thanks for the review!
Title: Liar 26 Jul 2010 2:11 pm
Reviewer: SentinelHuntress (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Sprout :)

    Author's Response: Thanks!!
Title: Liar 26 Jul 2010 7:37 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for this, this week has been awful and I needed an update for my favorite fic. It would have taken two or three chapters from one of the other fics I'm reading.

    Author's Response: :0) Yey!! Glad I was able to get you your 'fix' (pun very cheerfully intended) when you needed it. :0) Thanks for the review!

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