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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
Title: Fairy 19 Jul 2010 11:22 am
Reviewer: rd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Can't wait for the next chapter! One of the few WIP's I can't stop reading (normally wait til they're done lol). I love this story- excellent 'version' of HP, lovely writing style, mixing dialogue & exposition wonderfully.

    Author's Response: :0) So glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review!
Title: Fairy 19 Jul 2010 9:04 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Pure awesomeness. Really, if *this* is what Puffs are like, I think I would fit in with them better than I origionally thought. I like the biting plants at the entrance, and how Toby attatched himself to Tobi, and how the private room is feminine, and how they were razing Snape. I think I know how Snape enters the equation later but I can't wait to be informed. I wish JK had said more about Puffs in her books because your version is great!

    Author's Response: :0) So glad you like it so much!! Thanks for the lovely review!!
Title: Fairy 19 Jul 2010 2:15 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Hufflepuff! :) That's a perfect solution to where to put him!

    I like the OCs in Hufflepuff very much. They've already got their own personalities, and I'm fascinated by the idea that there are other Fae at Hogwarts who don't advertise themselves.

    I have a feeling that Dolores Umbridge is going to have a cow when she realizes that Tobias is a student there. I'm rather surprised that she didn't wig out when she saw him being sorted!

    In any case, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! You've done a great job with this tale, and I love coming back to re-read the earlier chapters.

    Well done!

    Author's Response: Yey!! I'm glad you like it so much!! It's so flattering to have people not only read, but re-read, my work. Thanks for the review!
Title: Fairy 19 Jul 2010 12:28 am
Reviewer: H20girl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great! OK, so now my myriad of questions:
    Will Deloris Umbridge threaten Harry/Tobias? Will someone on staff educate her so she does not do so? How will Tobias/Harry manage in Potions? Will Voldemort want Snape to be friendly to Tobias/Harry? What's up with the People-person that was sensed but not identified? Will other People connect with Tobias? They certainly know he can sense them. Who from the Court will come to check up on Tobias? Will they try to install guards for him? If not, would the Court set up a perimeter to 'guard' Hogwarts? How will Tobias/Harry respond to students behaving in a way that he would perceive as threatening to Mo? Will Hermione, now that Tobias/Harry was sorted into Hufflepuff, decide to be friendlier to him?
    Thank you.

    Author's Response: :0) Lol all I can say is, you'll see. :0) Thanks for the review!
Title: Fairy 18 Jul 2010 4:34 am
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. I like how this is going...

    Author's Response: Yey! Glad you like!!
Title: Fairy 18 Jul 2010 1:02 am
Reviewer: X (Anonymous) [Report This]
    chocholate solves anything, awkward or otherwise :) this increased number of People in his surroundings seems really interesting. i have a thing for formal speaches, traditional greetings and protocol in general, so if it wouldn't be too much of a bother, once it's discovered he's royalty, i'd really like to see you inserting some formal greetings with members of other People races. i'll give you a crocodile eats a bunny if you do *pleading puppy eyes* :)

    Author's Response: LOL don't worry - I'm rather fond of those sorts of things myself...:0)
Title: Fairy 17 Jul 2010 4:38 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. I loved the way you described Hufflepuff common-room and the dynamic you've created between the students and Harry/Tobias

    Author's Response: :0) Yey! Glad you liked!! Thanks for the review!
Title: Fairy 17 Jul 2010 2:00 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    If nothing else, Chocolate will fix just about any situation! :-)

    So-Settling in and then contacting the Court to say--I'm here and Here is where I plan to stay, if you want to see me come and visit? Just Play Nice.

    Sounds like a plan-hope it works!

    Thanks for the update! I really do love your AU here.

    V.

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like! Thanks for the review! And yes, in my books chocolate can fix just about anything. :0)
Title: Fairy 17 Jul 2010 12:55 pm
Reviewer: harryphila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey,

    I love the story and your writing style. I really like the way you re-introduced him into Hogwarts - didn't see him going into 'Puff, but you're right, it actually makes the most sense. I'm curious how the next few days will go - how will the teachers react (I don't like the idea of him not being allowed to take Mo to classes), how will the other people students react - will some of them talk to him? Will any of them contact to court before he does (hope not). And once he contacts them, are they going to show up at school? And what about Snape? Why is he such a bastard (no pun intened - i think...)?
    Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Yey!! I'm so glad you like!! Thanks for the review!
Title: Fairy 17 Jul 2010 12:31 pm
Reviewer: raton (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's so long since previous chapter was posted and now I'm happy!)))

    Author's Response: :0) Glad I made you happy. :0)

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