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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
Author's Response: LOL we'll see. Part of my reason for writing fanfiction is a sort of half-way point towards writing my own fantasy novels, so I don't know if I will be writing more fanfics after Outcast's Alley is over. I might, but for the moment I'm out of ideas. (I actually like writing two at once, and so would probably be doing so if I could come up with a good idea for another fic). That said, though, I WILL finish Outcast's Alley. It might get to be as long as LADTH, but it will not be abandoned. Thanks for the review!! Glad you like!!
Author's Response: LOL Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review! (And I love it when people reread my stuff!) :0)
I absolutely canNOT wait until the next chapter! Seriously, I check your story everyday on this site and FF.Net. Hurry before I drive myself insane with anticipation! Author's Response: LOL glad you're so excited. Thanks for the review, and enjoy the next chapter.
Wow. Okay and he's planning to rat her out to the Fae. Can we say 'international incident'? This has a HUGE chance of blowing up in his face. I mean, a human 'tortures' the prince of the Fae? That's like . . . a declaration of war or something. Harry, I sure hope you know what you're doing. Poor Harry. :( He's having a hard time getting his school work done. And ahhh, the puffs are so sweet. Oh dear. And Draco again. Suck it Malfoy. I can't wait to see his face. I NEVER understood how the Wizarding world can be chalk FULL of illusions and invisibility cloaks and extendable ears and polyjuice potion and yet EVERYONE takes EVERYTHING at face value. Blows me away. Okay, Zabini is something or other. Countdown has begun. I like how Snape got all mad over the bloodquill buuuuut I'm worried that the one time he lets things go Harry's way, it's all set to blow up into 'International Incident'. *crosses fingers* Counting down. Author's Response: :0) Glad you liked!! Thanks for the review!! Enjoy the next chapter!
HAHAHAHAHAHA! Trelawney is doping them up every class. Weeee! Draco's an Elf. HAHAHAHA! Oh gosh "a Noblemen" huh? I can't wait to see his face. . . . Now Snape's behavior in that situation is what really interested me. That was definitely atypical Snape behavior (or maybe I'm reading waay too much into it) I'm thinking either he really was only trying to protect Draco from his own stupidity, or the elf/fae standoff with a fae child involved kicked Snape's instincts off (assuming he has instincts) and made him all snarly towards Draco, or Snape was having a Grandpa moment and metaphorically beating his chest, or hell, maybe it was his own child's upset that was setting him off. That'd be nice. I'd like to see Snape all protective. But then I'd also like to see Snape cruelly reject them (I looove angst) so don't listen to me either way. I kinda agree with Snape about not having a baby in a potion's class but its not like Tobias has much choice. Umbridge!!! NOOOO!!! Oh. My. Gosh. That little rant is just the thing to set Hermione on Tobias' tail. She's a total freak like that. If she doesn't at least suspect who he is, I'll be shocked. The only reasons she wouldn't come to the conclusion that he is Harry Potter are 1) she doesn't know about 'Switches' 2) Harry doesn't have a kid or a girlfriend. 3) Harry's not a magical creature and she might be prejudiced enough to not associate Harry with the scary fae guy. The whole being royal thing could be enough to throw her off if it becomes known. Harry Potter's not a prince after all. Poor Harry. It pissed me off in the books and it pisses me off here. Umbitch is a freaking nightmare but its Harry who gets yelled at by the other teachers and told to shut up and keep his head down. Not. Cool. My poor adorable Harry. Author's Response: Hellos!! Thanks again for the lovely looooooong review!! LOL yeah, poor Harry. I do think the adults have a point, though - they don't know just how badly Umbridge is treating him, but it makes sense for them to tell him to keep his head down. Frustrating, but safer. :0)
So there ARE more people in the school! Neat! I wonder how they feel about Tobias being all out of the closet. Maybe they feel reassured cuz there's a big strong one of them there and people are kinda sorta not running screaming from him. Or maybe they feel like he's an exposure risk--I mean, they're apparently reeeeaally focused on hiding. So I'm interested to see if they'll flock to him or avoid him like the plague. NOOOOO!! Umbridge!!!! Meh. I don't think mentioning Sprout was any kind of big slip up. Considering 'what he is' and that everyone else thinks there are none there, its very feasible he would have met with Dumbledore and the Heads of Houses before enrolling/being accepted/whatever. Heh. No one's asked him that yet. "Sooo Tobias, what the eff are you doing here mein?" Snaaaaaaaaape. Hahahahahahaha!! So he's going to tell the royals where he is? I can't see them leaving him there without a fight. And then they'll probably show up at Hogwarts and Dumbledore will find out he's a royal and what happens when they call him "Harry" in front of everyone? Maybe they'll be discreet? Meh. Ignore me. I'm just thinking 'out loud'. Author's Response: LOL thanks for lovely long review!! And don't lick your computer screen. That can't be healthy. You don't know where it's been. :0)
I love the introduction of Blaise as a probable member of the Court (figuring out the rank of people by jewelry is kind of fun!), and when Flitwick greeted Tobias with an appropriate bow it made me grin imagining the scene in my head. Looking forward to what happens next. Well done! Author's Response: :0) Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks for the nice long review!! Enjoy the next chapter!!
Author's Response: LOL yup. Much fun. Thanks for the review!!
Sounds promissing ;) Author's Response: :0) Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review!! Enjoy the next bit!
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review!! The next chapter will be out momentarily. I hope you like it! |
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