That was AWESOME! I literally devoured this story in one go. Loved the gradual development between Harry and Severus, and though the whole abuse thing terribly saddened me, as always, the ending more than made up for it. :)
First time I've read a story set in a non-magical!universe, and I absolutely loved it. Wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Ramelia. I think a lot of readers will skip this fic for being a non-magic one. I am glad it did not discourage you. Mila
| Title: Sprayers
| 18 Jan 2010 2:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous)
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What a wonderful story! And it rings so 'true' as well. Most 'guardian' stories picture an Oliver Twist waif-like Harry and over-the-top Dursleys who beat, starve and rape, but this story rings far more true. Abuse doesn't have to be about broken bones and bleeding orifices to be horrible.
Harry was wonderfully normal and 'true' as well, and I liked the addition of Mark, who also felt very 'true', his malicious predatory behaviour appropriately petty.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, Mila
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