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Title: Midnight Initiation 07 Jun 2010 3:31 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    :-)

    Wonderful Chapter!

    V.
Title: Midnight Initiation 07 Jun 2010 2:58 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job!
Title: Midnight Bond 06 Jun 2010 6:11 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! So cool! I just love how they have all bonded like a real family. I feel bad for Hermione but somehow she will get through this with Harry and Sev's help and Selene's as well.

    Author's Response: Yes, she will. It will just take time. Thanks for reading.
Title: Midnight Bond 06 Jun 2010 4:34 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Sweetness! I love how Severus treated Hermione as well as Harry! I hope she comes to stay too! Great chapter! Please post the next part soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much1 I have just updated this!
Title: Midnight Entertainment 06 Jun 2010 4:02 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Can I just say--that was the best revenge ever!!

    I almost choked on my soda reading it! So awesome! In fact, I think I have to go back and re-read it . . .Okay, now I can finish the chapter . . .

    I hope you're in more weird frames of mind, LOL!

    I am so sorry about Gabriel. I know what it's like to lose a dog.
Title: Midnight Bond 06 Jun 2010 3:59 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter! I just love fluffy bonding moments like this! They just melt my heart!

    I also loved it when Harry comforted Sev after his nightmare, so cool!

    Author's Response: Aww! Thanks a lot. I like the warmth and healing parts the best.
Title: Midnight Entertainment 06 Jun 2010 3:54 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay I almost died . . .of laughter! Holy crow, that was so funny I almost peed my pants! Lucius . . .Bella . . .Voldy!

    I want this to be made into a movie!

    Hooray! Peter's gone and I say--whoo hoo!
Title: Midnight Bond 04 Jun 2010 6:46 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. I have a suspicion who Titania's identity is. But I won't say, less I ruin the suprise. You, my crafty Slytherin, are a very good author. :) Kudos.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! The next chapter's up now, so you can see if you're right!
Title: Midnight Bond 04 Jun 2010 1:58 pm
Reviewer: SunshineSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter as always! I'm glad Sev is back from his ordeal. I like the friendship between Harry and Draco, and I hope it can survive school.

    When Hermione was serving dinner, you mentioned four plates, shouldn't it have been three or did I miss something and Draco is back?

    Great work! Thanks!

    Author's Response: One never knows if something at school won't happen to either draw Draco and Harry together or apart.  No, Draco's not back, when I was writing that part, I was setting my own table for dinner and we had four people, so that's how that ended up being four instead of three.  Thanks for telling me. I have fixed it! And the next chapter's up!
Title: Midnight Bond 04 Jun 2010 1:35 pm
Reviewer: Frostbluete (Signed) [Report This]
    Well written as always! :)
    I just have one question, somewhere around the middle you write about Hermione cooking and then setting out four plates and the four eating together. But four? As far as I understand Draco has gone home and it's only Severus, Harry and Hermione. Did I miss something or is that a mistake?

    Keep up the good work, I'm always looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    When I was writing that part, I was setting my own table for dinner and we had four people, so that's how that ended up being four instead of three.  Thanks for telling me. I have fixed it! And the next chapter's up!


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