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Reviews For Moon Fire
Title: Midnight Breakthrough 02 Apr 2010 8:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I am so glad that Harry has started to get Moon Fire to trust him, and that Moon Fire's leg is healing! I worried that aportkey would be too tough on his leg, but I guess not.

    There was one typo that I noticed in the last paragraph... ..."and Hermione felt herself start to drift, lulled to sleep in Selene's embrace, her lasy coherent thought..." I think it's supposed to be "last."

    Thanks for the update! I wonder if Hermione's "beloved" is Draco? or Harry?
Title: Midnight Breakthrough 02 Apr 2010 7:42 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I love how you describe selene! This chapter was great
Title: Midnight Breakthrough 02 Apr 2010 6:28 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    loved it
Title: Midnight Allies 30 Mar 2010 12:46 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good twist thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks and hope you enjoy the new one I just posted.
Title: Midnight Allies 28 Mar 2010 2:47 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah that really was unexpected. But I liked it!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Midnight Allies 28 Mar 2010 12:17 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I am so glad that moon fire is getting help and yes Draco was unexpected

    Author's Response: Moon Fire will need lots of TLC in this story in order to get back in shape. Glad Draco was an unexpected surprise.
Title: Midnight Allies 27 Mar 2010 11:28 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying this. I also keep noticing the reference of Harry and Snape having a parental/child relationship. I wonder if Hermione will develop the same type of relationship after she has grieved for her parents and helps with Moon Fire I could actually see that sort of relationship building.

    Author's Response: That is of course, always possible.  She will grow very close to the midnight stallion in the coming chapters and once he is back to his old self anything could happen.
Title: Midnight Allies 27 Mar 2010 11:25 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this, and I keep noticing the references to parents and guardians it makes me wonder if Snape will become a parent to two Gryfindors.

    Author's Response: That's a possibility. He's already harry's guardian and like his father even if Harry hasn't realized that quite yet.
Title: Midnight Allies 27 Mar 2010 7:55 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Beautiful chapter!! I loved how moon fire comes around a bit and the character of Andromeda and Draco. Hope your arm feels better soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks I'm all better now.

    Moon Fire will continue to come around little by little as Harry spends time with him and gains his trust. See the next chapter for details. :)

Title: Midnight Allies 27 Mar 2010 5:17 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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