I really do think she's Selene cause she's so wise sounding! o.o I hope Sev will be okay, sometimes I don't like Selene either sine her tasks seem to be just as hard as Severus's other 'masters' tasks :(
ah is the girls Selene? Since she rides so well and cause she kinda appears out of no where........
ah i love Jasmine she's so sweet! lol Moon Fire XD ah Harry you're gonna have ur hands full!
wow harry must have an arm >_< poor nose!
oops reviewed the wrong part haha Dumbledore is being a stick in the mud in this one XD lol i really should just review after reading the chapter instead of letting it pile up!
arg Dumbledore :( can't accept any other way but his way. interesting place to put severu's home ^^.
Interesting curse, I remember it from the ten commandments film they play every Thanksgiving. Ah they died.... *shrugs* karma.... *prays they decide to treat others better when they come back as an animal* Since you only become human if you do good deeds in your past life, if you do not in this supposedly you come back as an animal...or something like that.
off to review other chapters!
| Title: Midnight Tragedy
| 18 Mar 2010 9:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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Normally, I would cry for a chapter as bittersweet and sorrowful as this but, at the moment, I'm currently in the middle of my Politics class ignoring my Professor and reviewing your story instead.
I half expected you to write more detail than there currently is. I thought you would prolong the process of Hermione's torture so that a reader would have a chance to truly understand how she felt. Please don't be angry with me, this is /my/ opinion only. Although, I understand why you may not have done so; you needed to involve Moon Fire and give him a chance to lose his memory. Might I add that I'm curious about that Auror with the goatee; is he Selene's husband? Or just a plain Auror that knows more than he should?
Might I add that stallions are troublesome at the best of times - even a well-mannered one. They think about one thing and one thing only; it will be difficult because Moon Fire is wild and he'll, obviously, want to add to his harem.
I won't say everything I want to, in case other reviewers read your reviews. However, I will say this. Harry and Hermione had better be careful; it doesn't matter that beneath the stallion is Severus Snape. They need to focus on the fact that Moon Fire is a dangerous and unpredictable animal with the instinct to defend himself. But, with love and patience, Moon Fire will fade and Severus Snape will return.
May Selene guide those two rambunctious youngsters.
Always yours,
Jewels.
In a tearing hurry, so short review. I can't tel you how much I'm loving this story. Thanks for the warning, I needed the kleenex.
Donna
OH my god poor Sev! Oh his leg and his head I will check out your new story.
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