So very good to read this again.
I’m here again. I’d forgotten how much I like your caring Vernon.
Look what popped up in the random box. How could I resist?
Sooooo good to read this again. Again, you made me laugh out load - seriously - made my heart speed up, made a tear leak out. Totally. Wonderful.
The children eat rather a lot of sweets so far. I hope that wizarding children metabolise the sugars better than Muggle children do or they would be susceptible to a whole host of problems.
Other than that, I am enjoying the story.
| Title: Parties and Parselmouths
| 11 Dec 2016 8:33 pm
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Training and Trainers
| 11 Dec 2016 8:24 pm
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Love Charity a great girl especially the high heels on sand trick!
| Title: The Pensieve
| 11 Dec 2016 8:15 pm
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Thank you an interesting insight into Slytherin
| Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb
| 11 Dec 2016 7:59 pm
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Thank you a lovely chapter and a very well realised magical shopping centre!
I should have mentioned this in chapter 58 (I believe) Severus' letter to Harry to explain his absence mentions a child that had been killed. Who was that??
All in all, though, a grand story. There was so much to enjoy and love about it: Harry, Severus, the Malfoys, the kids, the snakes...
Thank you for writing!
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