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Reviews For When the Boat Comes In
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Severus and Charity aren't in a relationship (at the moment).
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you like my portrayal of Harry :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy the story
Author's Response: Thanks: I was thinking about a lesson for Severus to be giving Harry and, of course, Defense is the obvious choice as Severus loves it and Harry needs it. Quirell is a bit useless in the canon- no point teaching your prey to defend themselves- so I thought it'd be fun to give Severus free choice as to subject-matter: it seemed in character that he'd choose the two, foundational duelling spells plus a charm to ensure that, if your wand goes awry, you can get it back. P.S. In almost all English schools, half-term holidays are around Halloween and I thought this would be a good excuse for Severus ^^. Besides, even though we're not told about it in the cannon, this might just be because nothing significant happens during half-term! It's more probable than not that Hogwarts would have half-terms; it would give the students a chance to catch uo on their schoolwork, get to know people from other houses/years and attend remedial classes if they needed them. (Not to mention that the muggleborns would probably riot if there were three whole months of school without a week off in the middle? Evil!)
Author's Response: Lol, well, he had been placed under a spell which, literally, made him walk a mile in Harry's shoes- albiet in his dreams. Once Dudley had been in Harry's place, he, naturally, realised that no child deserved how Harry had been treated and, therefore, decided that his mother was a terrible person. Something similar happened in the canon, when Harry rescued Dudley from the Dementors: Dudley certainly gained respect and a degree of affection for Harry, as evinced by his behaviour at the beginning of Deathly Hallows. The reason why Dudley's behavior is so much more extreme here is 1. the abuse has been more severe, 2. Dudley is younger (ie. more impressionable) and 3. he has seen life at Privet Drive from a 'Harry's eye view'. Author's Response: Lol, well, he had been placed under a spell which, literally, made him walk a mile in Harry's shoes- albiet in his dreams. Once Dudley had been in Harry's place, he, naturally, realised that no child deserved how Harry had been treated and, therefore, decided that his mother was a terrible person. Something similar happened in the canon, when Harry rescued Dudley from the Dementors: Dudley certainly gained respect and a degree of affection for Harry, as evinced by his behaviour at the beginning of Deathly Hallows. The reason why Dudley's behavior is so much more extreme here is 1. the abuse has been more severe, 2. Dudley is younger (ie. more impressionable) and 3. he has seen life at Privet Drive from a 'Harry's eye view'.
Harry might not like it, he would not have a choice. Yet, he would not be lied to. I am partially glad that you made Pomfrey lie. she is usually too perfect in stories. I think your-her small indiscretion is a nice touch. Not right, but nice. Author's Response: Yes, that's a perfectly valid arguement. Poppy is in a tricky ethical quandary and, of course, this means that people's views will vary as to the 'right' choice. Of course Poppy isn't perfect, none of the characters are in either the cannon or this fic. However, as you suggest, it's far more realistic if the characters have flaws and make mistakes.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I know, it's very sad but, in real abuse cases, the children often blame themselves- either wholly or to some extent.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yup, Fawkes definately got the last word ^^
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I thought they'd make a humourous but sympathetic pairing |
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