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Title: Happy Family 23 Dec 2015 2:25 pm
Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was brilliant! As well as splendid and wonderful. I love how Harry and Draco are getting along better and that Ron and Hermione accept him well enough. Than the banter and concern between Sinistra and Severus is always interesting to read. I particularly love the ending. I love how Dumbledore and Sinistra meddle when they both know how it would work out in the end and are simply being a catalyst. I than love how Lockhart was the conduit and I pity TR who had to listen to Lockhart and that Ginny remained innocent. I think this story is brilliant and wonderfull written. I would love to read more of this series (as I know my twin will love to as well) and I think it would be a wonderful full length story (as in it expands until TR's final death). I really loved how Lily showed up and that Severus has moved on. I think you're a most brilliant author and writer. Cheers and ta.

    Author's Response: You are too kind. :) Thank you.
Title: Start to a Beautiful Thing 20 Oct 2014 1:21 am
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    for once I agree with his meddling

    Author's Response: Thanks.
Title: Reoccurring Fears 19 Jul 2014 12:58 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ok, now that was confusing

    Author's Response: :)
Title: Happy Family 21 Jun 2011 6:34 am
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really cute!
    I enjoyed Snape and Sinistra arguing and hexing each other but in a loving way :)
    You did an awesome job developing the relationship between Snape and Harry and their trust.
    Awesome fic :)

    Author's Response: Thank you. :D
Title: Happy Family 27 Feb 2011 6:43 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved the story!

    Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. :D
Title: Interlude of Potions Class 24 Jan 2011 11:59 am
Reviewer: topsell (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm not sure if I'll be able to read much of this. While the plot is a great idea, the clunky execution via format (spacing in particular), lack of dialogue tags, first person and OOCness is making it difficult...

    You do have a very nice plot/concept, but this needs some serious beta-work!

    Author's Response:

    I was not aware that my first three chapters of this one had that formatting issue. I assure that the issue has been resolved now. Thanks for the review.

Title: Slytherin’s Official Welcoming Committee 24 Jan 2011 11:37 am
Reviewer: topsell (Signed) [Report This]
    I liteally moaned when I saw 'First Person'. It's one of the quintocential things I just say not to do when it comes to fanfiction..but I will give you a chance. I love the concept, it has a good rating and I have my fingers crossed for a potentially good story. Hopefully the perspective does not hinder the storytelling and, in fact, is used to make me more sympathedic towards the characters (Snape). /fingers crossed/

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Title: Happy Family 04 Aug 2010 6:16 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    *applauds*

    A dash of romance, a touch of angst and adventure, all mixed together with a pinch of h/c... Delightful. Well done!

    Author's Response: All in all that's my basic formula to a Snape/Sinistra story with Harry. Thanks Glad you enjoyed. :D
Title: Curious Culprit 04 Aug 2010 5:50 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I wondered if she might've had something to do with it...

    Author's Response:

    :D

Title: Consequences of Gryffindor Tendencies on a Slytherin 04 Aug 2010 5:45 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh-ho... Yeah, somehow I think the headmaster is gonna be getting an earful.

    Loved the foreshadowing - very nice, indeed.

    Author's Response: Thanks. :D

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