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Reviews For On the Other Side
Author's Response: Well I'll try, unfortunately I'm a slow writer... Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm especially happy you think I build up tension, because somehow with every chapter I write I fear it might be boring...
CCAP Author's Response: Glad you like it! I have to admit I don't know what CCAP means, but I suppose it's supposed to tell me to hurry up with the next chapter? Thanks for reviewing!
frenchy ps: I liked your french expression "laissez faire" actually I'm french and I didn't know you english guys had that type of expression too...funny
I like how the Slytherins - mainly Malfoy - are all in character. Also like how you've brought Millicent out a bit. No one ever seems to do anything with her. Nott too. Book never said much about them. I also love how Harry is having a really hard time adjusting. So, if he's not in divination, I guess that means he doesn't hear the prophecy about Wormtail, huh? Ooo... and when Black comes, can't wait for the cause that will come with that! You think Harry will ever make friends with Malfoy or Zabini? Oh! He's going to be so confused when Hermione is in Arthimancy too. :) Can't wait for the next update! --Alis Syn Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I'm glad you like the story. You brought up some interesting points. About the prophecy about Wormtail - I still have to think about how I'll handle this. As to Millicent: I like her, and I am going to give some more background information on her, too. Also about Nott, who I also find interesting to write.
I love the story so far :) Keep going, good work!
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