| Title: Little Slytherin
| 12 Jul 2023 4:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely little piece I love the little Severus
This one put a BIG Smile on my face :D
Nicely written Sweet and to the point :)
Aww, that's so perfect! I love that Severus can communicate from beyond the veil:) :)
Thank you!
I find myself agreeing with one previous reviewer, who wondered what Snape's pov would be of Al's visits - providing he makes a habit of going back over the years(maybe at Hogsmead visits and later through his aging?). Oh well, it's just a wish .....
You know, that eye up there, the banner, it's creeping the hell out of me. But on the other hand, it's very appropriate - in the best sense of the word - for this story. It's a little creepy, yeah, but sweet, too, and a tad bitter. That formula works for me. :)
Very nice story. I enjoyed how you set up the scene; all those sensory images made it all very real in my mind. And little Albus was cute. :)
I love a sweet one shot. Especially with Severus Harry and Albus Severus.
| Title: Little Slytherin
| 27 May 2010 10:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous)
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I really liked this story. Great job!
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