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Title: Chapter 6 21 Jan 2013 5:20 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I am extremely surprised that Harry cares about what Severus eats already, maybe if we could see a bit more of his thought processes because I want to understand your version of Harry better. I would say that I hope Harry is alright but I have a feeling he will be.

    Author's Response:

    In general, I always regard Harry as kind-hearted. Unnaturally so, really, given his home life. Regarding the eating, Harry really is just subconsciously returning the favor of being looked after. He didn't really put much conscious thought into it.

    Thanks for the feedback so far - glad you're liking the tale! 

Title: Chapter 5 21 Jan 2013 5:11 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I'm surprised at how kind or perhaps respectful they are being of each other. I really thought they would rip each other's throats out. And Severus came to the abusive relatives conclusion pretty fast but on such sound logic, I'm amazed you could get so far into his character so quickly. Thank you for this chapter, can't wait to see what else is coming.
Title: Chapter 4 21 Jan 2013 5:01 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I hadn't even considered that Harry would be in denial even though it would make a lot of sense. I was right about Severus taking Harry in. Yay! Thank you for this chapter, I wonder how everyone will react to Harry's news. I bet there will be apologies and tears involved.
Title: Chapter 3 21 Jan 2013 4:52 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that Snape is working so hard for Harry even though Harry is being irrational and not drinking the potions. I bet Severus takes him into his own rooms but I'm surprised that it would be Severus' idea rather than something forced upon him.
Title: Chapter 2 21 Jan 2013 4:44 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Why won't Harry take the potion? He must know it's not poison by now and he will die a lot sooner without it. I guess Harry can be annoyingly stubborn sometimes.
    Will Harry be excused from the tournament and if he isn't I feel like he's going to faint during one of the tasks.
Title: Chapter 1 21 Jan 2013 4:33 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    wait, what exactly went wrong with the formula? Why didn't Harry want to tell his best friends about what he was doing?
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jan 2012 12:39 pm
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    He's dying? What?!
    Great job though:)
Title: Epilogue 09 Dec 2011 11:15 am
Reviewer: Adriana Espan (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome story! Sweet and nice! I love it.
Title: Epilogue 08 Aug 2011 11:46 am
Reviewer: Wandacarla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! The way you write, well I am exhausted because I just could not stop at the end of each chapter. I think this might be the first fic that I EVER read straight through, and that is a very big compliment coming from me. I can't wait to read you other stories. Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Why, thank you! Glad you enjoyed the tale. I will eventually get around to the sequel, maybe...

    Anyhow, thanks for the wonderful R&R. ^^

Title: Chapter 10 01 Aug 2011 2:20 pm
Reviewer: PersianPianist (Signed) [Report This]
    you know, if I had free access to Alan Rickman, I would ask him to play the last scene. I'm afraid this one time my imagination isn't sufficient. I want to SEE it!

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha, me, too!

    Thanks for the R&R. ^^


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